This story is fantastic! I love being able t see the fatherly side of Teal'c that is so rarely shown! I hope you write more!

best line: However, the fact remains that Daniel Jackson had gone nearly a week without anything happening--and fate was about to correct that oversight.

Ever planning to continue?

best line:

"But why castles?" Daniel asked confused. "Wouldn't sand pyramids make more sense?"
"I...never really thought about it before," Sam said faintly.

Enjoying the moments with Sam - her POV would be interesting.

I like the way you've compared the differences between inter and intra-planetary culture.

Oh - this could be interesting.

Oh no, NO! Please tell me you'll continue!
I really need more, I love this story! ...please?

"Can I call you papa?" "I would be honored, youngDaniel." SWEET! :D

OMG, what a sad memory... saddest b-day ever! =(

This is so sweet! I can see it clearly: Teal'c & Danny. Great.

Poor kid. So young and all alone in the world. Hurray for Murray!!

Wow! I can't believe I've just found this story. It's so different! :)

I like it, very nice detail and is very fullfilling.

E! the bad guys kidnapped daniel, Quick teal'c save him!

Honestly, having Teal'c be the one adpoting Daniel is an interest variation on the usual little daniel thing. Love it.

I like the story, it's one of the most original ideas I've seen in a while.

Great story! I've read quite a few AU stories where Daniel is a little boy and the rest are adults but nothing quite like this. Its a great story.

Excellent. And surprise endings are the best. :)
Oh, and it's personnel not personal. :)