Great job here. I think that I am going to do a piece set at the trial... and I love your portrayal in this. I can just picture Narcissa sitting ALONE on that side of the court room, the only DE family member with the balls to show up- and the other side being FULL of people. She'd just sit there and be cool and collected and can twitch her face just so that Lucius can tell when she thinks something is a lie, or ridiculous, or even funny. It's very telling and I love it. Bravo!

Very good job. Lucius' reminising about happier times makes him seem almost human which isn't something that happens often. You did a great job writing this. Keep up the good work!

I like it. It fits with the other story extremely well, excellent example of the two sides of the story. I didn't notice any grammar or spelling mistakes either, which makes a nice change. Although I must admit, I'm not perfect!

Nice description of emotion.

Usually I would say that chapters should be longer, but in this case I think you've got it just right. If it were to be longer it would not flow as well.