i thought it was brilliant.

Hey. Im marcus and I like this story thingy. I am a very "into" stories and sometimes I get emotional, but hey I like this story and you should write more of it.
keep up the good work.
P.S. my story is Xmen The Shards of Destiny. care to R&R
that would be great.

Awesome insight into Mystique's thoughst! I liked it! :)

Nice! ^_^

Not bad at all. Interesting style. Almost good enough to stop me from yelling at you for doing this when you should be working on Jenny... but not quite. GO!

Excellent, it captures the true Mystique as she really is?