wow, i like this...it's really almost like another part of ryou that's talking to himself...this is very cool. good job.

ps you should keep writing!!

Woah, nice. A little bit...mysterious. Cool!

Aww! That was sad and cute at the same time! ^^ Nice idea. Great job! - Amaya

Wow. That was awesome. Favs.

Swet. Great job! =D

Silly silly...he should make some real friends...oh well. Bakura's got him pegged, at least, the angsty sad deppressed Ryou...

*sniff*

Aw, too bad you aren't adding anymore. And it was such a cute angst story! Wait a sec, cute angst...did I just contradict myself? Can you even use those words together? *goes into deep thought* Hmm...I'll spend some more time on that later. Anyways, great story!

Mana: O.O How...cool! XD Aah how cool...I love it.

Amana: Sounds like you Mana..

Mana: STOP MAKING ME SOUND LIKE A MARY SUE! *bashes Amana*

Imani: I like it! It's...cool..in a dark way...

Mana: woohoo dark...*lights black candles*

hm...i know this is gonna sound really weird, but...

i thought it was so cute! ^_^

yes, i find angst like this to be cute, especially when bakuras thinking about his hikari. nice job.

Hmm…Quite interesting shot. I like Bakura's musings about Ryou, life, past and so. Cynically laughing about his so called silly-hikari, Bakura describes the whole status and Ryou's confused inner world through your words. Well written and ANGSTY. I love it.

Please forgive me for the lateness of my review…

Yours,
FlEsH BoNeZ AnD BlOoD.