Great story! I like how the story ended off with the Wraithe coming. How it fits in there.

Loss of it's mate! It doesn't want revenge does it?? Great story!!

Great story! I hope the Wraith doesn't suck the life out of little John!

I love it! The wraith stole John! Eek!

Great story! I really like it!!

Good story so far.

Flame flame flame flame flame flame flame flame flame flame flame flame flame flame flame flame flame flame

:D:D:D

Honestly Joulez, why would I flame such a fantastic story? :D

It's great and you had such a great idea, Rodney and John as kids. :D

Too cute, please keep going

please update soon! if you are gonna update

i don't get it :( plz write in simple form for the dumber ppl like moi

Congratulations on finishing your first Atlantis fic, now I say, more please. I am so glad you had them make up, maybe that's why I couldn't sleep, the thought of McKay and Shep hating each other :P no some how I don't think that was it. Nice long chapter too, I like long ones and I loved it when 5 year old John apologised for Shep, it was so adorable. Damn now I can't beg you for sneak peaks. Start another one, I need someone to pester :D

Sparks

very well done sad to see the kids go!

Ah ha it is all resolved. A nice ending :D

ROUND OF APPLAUSE! Many kudos to both of you for awesome writing and awesome beta-ing! YOu guys make an awesome team! The story was great and i hardly found any mistakes the whole time! I really liked this last chapter. I especially liked how both the kids ended up back home, very creative! And once again it was so in character! Loved it! Awesome awesome job!

your story was great i hope u write many more Atlantis fics as good as that bravo!!