I'm new to fanfic and i've added your story to my fave list but i forgot to review, and so i'm 5 yrs late and you probably don't give a damn about it anymore but THIS STORY IS FRIGGING AWESOME! i loveeeed Wonderfalls and this story was soooo spot on. thankyou for writing it.

You really manage to keep Jaye and Mahandra in character. Nice job!

Very nice!

Great job!

Great sequel! Keep writing! :)

As I said to your last fic, the dialogue is excellent! I can just see Caroline Dhavernas and Tracie Thoms acting this out...I hope there's going to be another installment.

please update

This is really cute. I love the Mahandra/Jaye dynamic. Please tell me this isn't the end! :)

I love this! The Dialouge is perfect!

Yay! You wrote a sequel...and it's just as good as the original! Double yay!

Yeah! I'm so happy to see a new Wonderfalls fic. I have enjoyed your work in other fandoms (Firefly I do believe). Great job here also, Jaye and Mahandra's interactions on the show were my favorite. You captured them wonderfully.

Write more I'll read.

Much luv,

Inkosazana

Pritty good so far I hope it does get better tough and i think that the animals have to talk more. It is also a little confusing with the dialog part but other then that its Wonderfalls so it has to be good.

Keep up the good work!