You made me feel all fuzzy inside... (No wait, I think that was the day old popcorn I had.) But I loved this, it had Johnny in it, and the ending was good, but kind of corny.

This was really good!

Knowing that Johnny will die from saving the kids, wow. I don't know how to explain it but it really gives to the story. Especially since Johnny doesn't know the circumstances yet. You're a good writer, keep it up.

Dont die! I'd be sad! I love it! I love the ending. Everyone was asking Johnny how he was, that can be annoying XD but I like how you ended it. I luff Two-Bit XD;; he is so annoying. Keep it up!

Hey, I really liked that! I loved the Japanese (was it Japanese?) poems...real pretty!

I did like the ending!

"So, how're you doin', kid?"

"Fine."

"Good for you, kid."

REALLY liked the ending!

:) tk421beth