Late... But this is simply great !

Wow! I love how Lori told off TnT in the beginning of the fic. It was fabulous!

"Hey! HEY!" Lori yelled running forward. TnT slammed Merton into the lockers one final time before turning to look at her in surprise.

"What? You’re defending the little geek too?"

"Get a life, you losers!" Lori snapped back. "Come on, Merton." She reached out to the teen goth, who looked up at her gratefully and took her offered hand.

"What do you people see in him? First Dawkins, now you! You know, Dingle’s not doing much in the way of boosting your popularity either, little lady. People are starting to wonder about you," Tim Eckertt warned Lori who turned on him, eyes blazing.

"Maybe someday it’ll get through your thick skulls that I don’t give a damn what people think about me! I’m tired of being part of this whole shitbag you call high-school society! Especially if it has ‘guidelines’ about who I can and can’t be friends with."

Tim flustered, at a loss for words. He looked to Travis who shook his head woefully. "Another one bites the dust. Nice goin’, Dingle. Why don’t you turn the rest of the high school body into freaks?"

"Suck it!" Lori yelled. Merton’s eyes grew wide. TnT glared at her.

I love how she made both Travis and Tim flustered. I always saw her as someone who can take care of herself, and defending Merton like that was brilliant on her part.

Keep up your awesome writing! :)

It's sweet but I still want to think of Merton single for all of us elgible girls to snatch up :P Still good though.. Wow.. 2004.. I'm REALLY late.. .

owh wow, I love it!
you start of a bit 'normal' but then in the end it's all so beautifully written.
it's like you have to get into the story..
it's really great *thumbs up*
-Ninke

Enjoyed it lots, thanks for sharing.

More! It's great!

Very Good Stuff

that was really good. I liked it a lot.

Aw... I always thought Merton was the best one for Lori. :P

sad...

Very good

That was just great. I thought that I was the only Merton/Lori shipper out there. More, more, more.

That was beautiful. I don't usually like romances, but that explained a lot of what Lori might have been feeling during 'SWSWRY'. And poor Merton needs a hug. :) Another great story, Foxglove33.

Okay, I fixed what was wrong with the review box. I had put a 'noembed' tag into the html document when I uploaded it, so that kept the review box from showing up. All my stories are fixed now! :)