I don't like this story, it's absolutely brilliantly written, but its just too sad. I'm only joking, i do like it really, you really captured the moment and the emotions that they would be feeling, well done. Can you write a happy story next time? A like happy endings!Sorry if i sound pathetic!Hee!hee!hee!

Now that was sad! How about telling us some history about how this came to be? What was going through Jack's mind durring those last moments?

::sniff:: Oh yeah, reading a Jack death story makes my Easter Weekend 'very' happy! j/j lol Great story, for one that kills of a character! lol :)