I like the idea of this story and how Ed and Roy re-introduced themselves as a way of making up for their fighting. However, you overused the word "fuck."

Wai! I've been waiting to review your things! _ I'm making my way down the list, and I love your one-shots. They're beautiful. Good job on this one too, it is true that Edward can overlook the Colonel (And Roy just coughed and asked 'How?: *rolls eyes* I have some pretty idiot voices running around in my head.)

I love all your one-shots! Keep writing. _ (I _adore_ Gossip, by the way.)

That was a beautiful story, very well written.

I agree, agreat little story and well written

I LOVE THIS STORY! YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD AUTHOR! I HOPE TO SEE MORE FROM YOU!-

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I loved that story. A great moment between Roy and Ed with no yoai.