Awwww... So sad!

D':

Oh my goodness. This is sooooo sad. But very realistic.

Sapphireswimming

man i just wanna beat the shit out of those motherfuckers who insulted trisha elric. and go ed for standing up for his mom!

Wow. This is very well-written. It broke my heart, but the worst part is that gossip like this was all too common back then.

Must. Resist. Urge. To. Strangle. Nonexistent. Characters! *twitching with each word*

Ed must be pretty young in this if he's asking when Hoenheim's coming back.

How you portrayed Trisha and Edward's dispositions was nice. If only Ed had some kind of weapon with him... Damn those evil gossip whores. :(

Automail-knife arm to the rescue...!

-Sked-San-san

you know, we never get to see all that much of what kind of a father hoenheim was before he left; i love stories like this.

i feel so sorry for ed and trisha having to hear that! i woudl just want to beat all those people up!

Clarity in writng of such a deep and sensitive topic is profound, I appreciate it.

Going on favorites.

(In my world, Trisha punches out the lady who insulted Ed, then goes after her son, finds him under a tree, comforts, and they go home to Alphonse, who's playing with Winry, and finally got the upper hand on his brother in the fight for her hand in marriage.)

Old fashioned people fail. I liked this very much.

Aww, how mean. I HATE YOU! Gret job, though! What's a little hate between writers? _; Awsome.

Oh, wow. I was hoping to find something good and I definitely succeeded. Very poignant, very short but still very powerful. Gossip is bad. ._.

I'm definitely going to be checking out your other stuff.

that...was...sad...but the ed part was so cute!

Aw, that's sad...por little Edo-kun. This is really good, though. I enjoyed it. Could you possibly write more?