wow, I got a little shocked when Kenshin asked “Kaoru, would you fear if the one you starting to love is dying?”, I mean, sure they end up 2gether, or short of (and I really want to, no doubt), but as he hadnt said anything before, not even think...anyway, thank u so much 4 the fic, just keep updating please!! By the way, where do Kaoru and her mother live now if not in Japan? And who the hell is that bloody guy??Looking forward 2 reading next chap...x

good fic

OMG OMG OMG OMG! UPDATE FAST! ticktockticktockticktock...I can't wait...
I really like this. only thing is that I think kenshin declared his love way to fast. i thinkhe should still be in the guilt/fear stage. maybe slow it down a tad? but anyway, really good!

ahh... finally you updated... haha... you wrote half of that in your account? lmao... and yeah i am cy, btw... my actual name is cyravil (pronounced SIGH-rah-ville...-.- its horribly when teachers say it wrong)AHH a cliffie... ::glares:: oh and btw, im just finishing off chapter 2 of do you believe in me... hehe... i jsut been a tad busy at school wif exams coming up... anyway, good luck with school... maybe you need to work on your english...;) ::jokes:: ja ne

so sweet and sad *sob*
u no cy rite? pinoykengumi7?
she is my frend so i go ur story title from her profile thingy.. >.<
kepp writing!

whee! mah bro musta stop dwnloading coz i am able to check fanfiction... HEHE... hey isnt jo-chan meant to be joU-chan? hmm... your grammar...*faints* but oh well... as long as e can understand what you're trying to get across to us...^_^ wow... that was quick. i mean as in kenshin falling for kaoru... etc... im glad that you like my fic. i havent done anything on it though. i just recently posted another fic, can this be love? , so if you wanna check it out... anyway... im glad that you updated...^_^ *pinoy v. happy* so yeah. ja ne and i hope that you will update soon so i wont ahve to go and read the other chapters again so i know whats happening...^^" P.S. i had to do that to know what was happening...0.0 heehee... this is a long review... ja ne, and kenshin is acting sorta playboyish...^^"

Hey,you got a really great story here. UPDATE ASAP ^-^

heyo... COOLNESS... kenshin is ... playboy? anyway... yeah... ARIGATO GOZIMASU for reviewing my fic... actually ive been thinking of updating it but not many ppl are reviewing and i sorta lost inspiration coz i was doing my other fic... tch. yay...! the internet is fast at the moment so i can review~! so happy! BTW - whats with the 'keke...'? hehe... thanks for the happy bday greeting...=D far out im doing crappy maths at the moment... ooh... about the"f-word" hehe... v. interesting fic... keep on writing...=D ja ne

Tadaima!! ah darn school!! Soo many homework soo much studying!! Oh wellz...anyho I lurrves it!! Its kawai! PLEASE UPDATE SOON...and that reminds me...i have to update my story too...darn...
Ok well see ya next chapter!!
Sayonara!!

-Kioku-chan

ORO OUT!

hello tenshi... now this one is kinda weird, but the plot was nice... i was shock when my nee-chan did something weird at kaoru, but it's nice... please update soon... ok ^_^

hello tenshi! i love this new fanfic... it really is great and amazing ^_~
it's very cute... kenshin and kaoru... going to sleep together in one room, that is soo...great!
but does kaoru's father married another... that's soo...sad... but i love it... keep it up ok!

^_^ ja tenshi!

Hiya, Stephanie-chan!
Nice story you got here. I have to say though, this story sounds like another fic I read, and I have to agree with your other reviewer who wrote this as well: this fic is kinda like scented candle's Only with You. But ah well!
Well, there were grammatical errors here and there and some spelling errors. For the grammar you use, make sure you stick to the same verb tense. You tend to jump around using both past and present verb tenses (course, I am a bit of a hypocrite saying that seeing as I tend to do that as well, but you tend to do that quite a bit).
I like Kenshin and Kaoru's interaction though! It's pretty funny. And the part at the end. Man, Kenshin no baka! Ahaha. Well, I hope you update soon! atoots!
-meeh

oro...hey im 12..to!!HI pinoy!
And hello rklovergirl-san..hehe bye!

HEY YA!Mes a loves it ...it reminds me of this other fanfic...called, "Only With you" and that darn author hasnt even updated...anyways...I Luurve urfic!!

omigd i luv this story!they're all obviously soo different (especially kenshin-gd why'd u make him do that?gonna kill u!-kiddin'kiddin'). lookin forward to da next chappie so-UPDATE SOON!