Wow. Just plan wow. I love stories like this. The best thing ever was no dialouge. I mean, it's great to hear, and know what a character says, but the way we're intended to write is so sloppy. Sad part is, I'm really wanting to go to sleep and contemplate this amazing work some more, but I've gotta go was dishes.

Poor Kakashi D:

So sad!But I love agnst!

wow this amkes me feel really sorry for kakashi *cries*

Hi ! I love this story and I wish translate it in frensh.
Are you ok with this ?

O.O
Oh. I LOVE it. No, it's not your usual style, but I adore it. The apathy and desperation...so pretty. Your description of Kakashi's state before the first time they f*cked - the comment about being a better ANBU than sensei - yeah, I fully admit that they made me squeal. Deep inside. ^-^

I really think you should continue this, it'd make a great story, having them one day suddenly run into each other and get into a conversation o.o

That was some NICE. ANGST.

God I loved it! It was short but intense.

The sadist in me loves Kakashi like this for some *unknown* reason... pining away for Iruka and believing his own lies in order to see him again and to live and die for him... gah.

Truly, I loved this oneshot! It was rough but that's how it was supposed to be and I see it no other way. Gorgeous!

This was... umm... nice, for lack of a better word. Nice, in a very twisted sort of way for me, but nice nonetheless. ^_^ I liked the idea of the story, that was the bottom line of it. "There are worse things to die of than kindness"--I loved it. ^_^ Very well put and a nice story!

Poor Kakashi. It's beautiful in a kind of weird, sadistic way.

Awesome--completely f*cked up in the way that reality tends to be.

Kakashi's pretending makes my heart hurt. Or rather, the whole of the circumstances makes my heart hurt. His guilt, how closed off he is...how you can make him genuinely care about Iruka without coloring it with fluff. "He's been killing for and dying for things his entire life."

The harsh life that Kakashi lived and continues to endure comes across insanely well. Thanks for posting this.

~Michelle

*sad face* poor kakashi...this reminds me of a sasunaru doujin...thing (i can never spell that) that i read once. except naruto ended u committing suicide...that's besides the point. i loved this fic, sad though it is ^.^

Oh...absolutely beautiful. I loved it so much.

not your usual thing at all...but still well written. much more emotional than usual, but that works for me. (as a matter of fact, any of your stories workfor me, but thats ok). poor kakashi sensei...cruel life, isn't it?

It just broke my heart to reaad that. It was so sad and beautiful. I love all your stories, and this one is on exception. Keep up the good work.