 hcm 2006-10-24 . chapter 1The way you give insight into a scene is breath-taking! This story is a perfect example of how, with your amazing talents, you make the most emotional scenes, even more emotional. This part may be your own original, but it fits nicely within the motif and plot of the series, the dialouge foreshadows the infamous "With us, it's never off the table." without giving away anything. To put it simply: this is great! |
 DeathbyChiasmus 2005-08-28 . chapter 1“Yeah, yeah, let’s never speak of that again.”
I can totally imagine Ross saying that. You know, nervous laughter on the "yeah, yeah," and then suddenly, abruptly, perfectly serious: "let's *never* speak of that *again*." Great characterization and dialogue through the whole story...really sweet. |
 emma 2005-08-22 . chapter 1 hey I loved this! continue it please. good job
I love your writing. |
 newportbabe44 2005-08-15 . chapter 1Just the right amount of sweetness. Nice work. |
 Exintaris 2005-08-11 . chapter 1 Very nice. I liked the Monica eruption. |
 Lobsters forever 2005-08-10 . chapter 1it was pretty good. Well, i iked it. Continue. |
 little pumkin 2005-08-10 . chapter 1 this was beautiful. I always wondered how this situation was going to happen. thank you for it. please keep writing. i love your stuff. |
 FriendsAddict 2005-08-09 . chapter 1You made my insides melt:) Great one-shot. I must say, you're a really good writer! |