Great story but a very sad end to it.

KYA!! (again)
Another awesome fic! *hands you a cookie* I love how you capture their personalities so well. Also, it's a good transition from the hilarious stuff to the sad things. I was literally covering my mouth to not laugh during Shikamaru and Chouji's argument. (2am-- I had to be quiet!) And Ino is a soul-sucking bitch? LOL!

One complaint: Now when I search this (er.. I was about to say 'couple'), I'll be dissappointed because it won't be this well written! :(

*goes to read all your stories* Keep writing! And if you ever write a book, tell me! =)

That's so sad, so deep when Shikamaru goes through all the feelings he has about this, about how he isn't sure he can love Ino and whether or not he's really supposed to be there or just a throw in.
Really well written, first deep story I've read in ages without smut, LOL

-Alika613

Wow, great story. Not anything bad to critique in it. Shika's point of view was really interesting and the plot kept me reading the whole way. Bravo.

Dear Imbrium Iridum,

I loved it so much! I was laughing through my tears. My heart broke and throbbed with pain but at the end it was so beautiful.

This story was amazing, you manipulate words so well! They way you use metaphors was just immaculate. Ah, i still can't get over all the misery in this story, it was really sad. But the way you incorporated humour as well, it was lovely.

This fanfic is one of the best i have read in a long time! Keep up with the good work and please write more about this team.

I am now slowly becoming a fan of this team. Chouji is so cute and chubby, Shikamaru is just so funny ... and troublesome (LOL) and Ino she sweet and so admirable.

The grammar was excellent. The plot was superb. The characters fitted well into the personality of the anime and manga. It was way too wonderful.

I can't wait to hear from you in the future!

With all my love,
Sims2lover
xoxoxoxo

awh so cute, so sad, wah...

^_^ slaughtergirl

Loved it.

OMG, cute! This was adorable, but bittersweet at the same time... Lovely, tho. Simply lovely.

(T_T) so sad *sniffles* However, like last time, very well written. Good job.

Aw...


That all that needs to be said..

Very Cute!! Never would have thought of Shika as a security blanket... I guess it kinda fits though, for the story if nothig else... Anyway!! It was very cute and I loved it!! ^_^

Man what a tear jerker. a good tear jerker.

I really like SelfReliance. This is a sidestory? It mkes sense, with Chouji wanting to carry the baby instead and Shikamaru confused with their relationship.

Gods I love you!
...And your fic, I guess. >3<
Somuchgood. You have humor, not-quite-angst, fluff, and so damn beautiful. Shika kicks ass, and I've always thought so, but your Shika is even better--if that's even possible. This is one of those really great fics that you can't help but love--like all of your work.
You are one of the few that have the Gift (being able to write *really* well) and are Blessed (able to write humorous/fluffy angst). I've found a few with the first and fewer of the second. To have both is all but unheard of.
*flees*

so cute :3