Interesting. Well written.

It was short, but a good chapter. Keep up the good work.

Is this going to be only a one-shot story? I want more! I can almost imagine Atton saying that out loud because it resembles his confession before the Exile when you ask him about his past. It was great! Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Very nice. I liked his thoughts on how he doesn't like his old self..kind of creepy that he feels that darkness still lurking in him. Well done.