oh so cute... that's sad, even. haha

i really think that you should continue this story

Again, I absolutely loved it! Your use of language is perfectly suited to the characters, the action is fast-paced but exhilarating and fun.

Overall just the perfect amount of Azureshipping! Delightful!

And, the scene with Kaiba falling on top of her...that was brilliantly done! Absolutely brilliant!

lol i didnt even see the mokuba throwing darts then thats when i started cracking up

k, i know this is a oneshot, but canyou PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel!?!?!?!?!?!?!
I BEG YOU! *on hands and knees*

please update! u haven't touched this story in ages!

it was great! Wait no it wasn't,IT WAS AWESOME!!

Beautiful! Wonderful! And I'm heeding your advice about not asking for a second chapter. This was perfect in and of itself. The final image of Mokuba throwing darts was great. Could totally picture it in my head. Thanks for making my day!

Actually, I did like it.
Loved the darts part.

this is a really good story! you have to update or else!

Update!! this is a really good story. i can't wait to see what happens with Mokuba!

aw, poor mokuba! good fic

make a sequel! good!

that was hilarious i loved it. please write another one

it was good... keep updating more chapters!