I can't wait for your nex chapter. i think it would be intersting to see in a later story that the Junior Zords could be interchangeable with the Seniors'. Ian seems to be a really good character

aw damn it's over. *pouts*

that's awesome. really. so the iguanodon has a similar function to the dragonzord? awesome, that's a really nice tough. and it's sad to see them all go home... you made that so sad. i really liked this line: "Ian was the last Goondiwindi student. After he hopped onboard, the door closed with a 'hiss', and the bus driver eased the bus down the driveway and out onto the highway, the bus soon disappearing from sight as we all stood waving it goodbye."
Although it is bloody long, it says so much more than it actually says, and it's really a nice use of language to express that.

thank you for a wonderful story and i look forward to the next one when you get around to it!

Stick around, you say? I plan to!! These just keep getting better, seriously. I love that Zord battle... and your description of their awakening.

Sick of me??

You're doing an excellent job, keep it up!! ;)

I like the way this goes - in particular Ian not jumping at the chance to go get himself half-killed fighting aliens. ;) I'm getting a little confused, is it going to be okay Ian being a Ranger from a different town? Is that going to work or am I tremendously confused?

Yeah, that went *real* well... ;)

I was at Murraylands in '97 - we didn't have a SeaWorld visit, but we did go canoeing. You've definitely done a good job bringing the camp to life, and I'm always amazed at how well you've defined the voices of your characters.

hi peter! me again!! this so reminds me of playing power rangers on school camp in year seven. you have the whole exuberant little kid thing going, it's really brilliant to read. well done!!