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| Untamed of Wildwind 2008-07-25 ch 5,  | abuseHmm... I'd like to see where this is going... |
| Nomanic 2008-06-11 ch 5, | abuseI never really played as Kimari. I guess I'm not a spear/pike person. I like the fic. |
| Gisli M. 2007-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abusequite amazing idea of story xander taken as avatar of first evil and put in world its is corporal such as world sin exist and fiends corporal ghost what will happen? |
| Cherri202 2006-11-25 ch 5, | abuseYou finally get into the final fantasy bit and then you don't update! C'mon! |
| midvalley9 2006-05-24 ch 5, | abusePlease post the next chapter! This has so much potential! Don't stop, ever! |
| Bobboky 2006-01-15 ch 5, | abusecool |
| Sierra-Falls 2005-12-25 ch 5, | abuseyou've made a very intriguing set up for the cross. I tingle in anticipation as to further chapters that I hope are soon forthcoming... Heh, aka, update soon, ne? But, question, did Caleb/the First actually go through with the eye thing? I seem to remember something about a multicolored tendril doing something, but was it gouging or just holding open his eyelids? |
| Suzuka Blade 2005-10-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseDear writer, I am sincerely sorry for the following message. I truly could NOT help nor stop myself. Suzuka Blade FEEdiNG THE MUSeS! *throws MUSE CHOW(patent pending) to the muses* MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA BUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA TUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA DUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ZUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA PUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA KUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA GUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA JUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA |
| Dirbatua 2005-09-11 ch 5, | abuseoh about time i was wondering if he was ever gonna get there |
| Morrolan 2005-09-10 ch 5, | abuseMore soon...please? |
| Dreamlight 2005-09-09 ch 5, | abuseI like how you put Xander in the pre-FFX storyline. It'll probably flow better than if it took place during or after. Great job, update quicker! lol. |
| TheDeadWalk 2005-08-18 ch 4, | abuseMan I can't believe that Buffy is this stupid I mean she just takes the First EVILs word over a friend whose been there from the beginning, stupid is as stupid does. I hope Willow,Dawn,Faith,Giles, and the potentials rip her a new one. As for Spike at least he's the bad guy again, I just hope someone will have enough brains and common sense to figure out that Spike was the traitor and not the X-Man. |
| Brutal2003 2005-08-18 ch 4, anon. | abuseI gues that really did look pretty bad for Xander. And I think that the way your going about the fic with some more background before you "throw" him into another world is a great Idea. Please keep it up. |
| Morrolan 2005-08-18 ch 4, | abuseMore soon please. |
| Dreamlight 2005-08-18 ch 4, | abuseAnother great chapter, playing off the paranoia of Buffy was great... if not just a little out of character. I think she'd be more to tie him up and interregate him than to condemn him, but then again, you're the one with the buffy fic, not me. :-D |