This is really, really good. One of the best short piece of Luter - uh, that's for Lucy and Carter, right? Extremely sad, and somehow inoccent... Keep on write!

This is very very good. Thats some deep stuff.

Brooke

Very interesting. A bit hard to follow at some points, but overall intereting. The last paragraph is great. Liz

oooh, very nice..liked it:)

Whoa! That was really funky!

ooohhh...that was...different...good...but different

Wow... just rendered speechless... the concept confused me at first, but at the end... wow and that's all I have to say.