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fiona
2008-05-02
ch 2, anon.
abuseI like the story and I hope you continue with it.
itsu-sual
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseaww, that was really sweet but sad. poor Rath! i hope you continue this one day!
anime-queen46
2008-01-09
ch 2,
abusehey go for it this would make a good story
Goddess of Twilight
2007-09-16
ch 2,
abuseHey, I think you should continue ^_^ it would be cool to see Rath and Nefer-tina get together...heh
fourfourfourfour
2007-08-26
ch 2,
abuseu should ttly keep going! i'd love to see what happens in the end!
kairi-heartilly
2007-02-08
ch 2,
abusehey! I'd really like to read this story if you are going to turn it into full featured story. I just love stories about Nefertina and Ja-kal! ^-^
pyro's hoodie
2006-12-21
ch 2,
abuseYES YES YES Your should keep writting this story! For only one chapter so far its very good and funny. So you really should keep going.
Madame-Cazone
2006-06-03
ch 1,
abusePoor Rath. He totally needs someone to love.
glitterbee
2005-12-09
ch 1,
abuseAww. Poor Rath!

I totally enjoy the idea behind this one Gol. You had some great dialogue in there as well.

My only crit for it is that I wthink it might be even more effective if you drag it out in places to establish the character changes a bit more first. (I.E--Nefer-tina's inner dialogue about loving Ja-Kal. I'd have built up to it a little more so that when it hit, it really punches you.)

But for a one shot-quickie, it was totally enjoyable. =^_^+
Allura Arwen
2005-11-29
ch 1,
abuseAw! Poor Rath! ;_; That is so sweet! Poor Nefer-tina! I don't know about Rath knowing everything, but this is a real nice story! Keep up the great work! God bless!
Allura Arwen
Mahalove
2005-09-10
ch 1,
abusewah what ... *sniff* this cant be the end
Katherine Burnett
2005-08-22
ch 1,
abuseThis is a great story. Very touching. Please write more stories like these.
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