Ahh, good ol' Jazz still blastin' his music at full power. TT_TT Geez this makes me wanna cry... TT_TT

:D great story! Love the ending!! Mirage's and Starscream's descendants!! YAYZ!! ^_^

This was such a good story, and the ending was so cute. It's nice to know Jazz still has fun in his old age.

This fic is really touching. I'm glad to see a bright future for Cybertron where the labels "decepticon" and "autobot" no longer exist.

I love the details you used to describe Jazz, especially his manner of speaking. Everything captured his personality, or at least my view of it, perfectly. It was great how you didn't announce that Jazz was the old mech, you just used his personality and some descriptive text. The prank at the end was priceless and very Jazz. :D

I'm definitely checking out your other works now.

~Garjan Ingel

Interesting read.
I like the fact that you mentioned that even though many people are against war, sometimes it's inevitable.
This was both sad and sweet, and well written to boot =), awesome job.

that was a sweet little story with a nice message. We should never forget what others have gone through to give us what we have.

This was beautiful to read.

And so sad too. You did an excellent job describing all those absences and empty spaces through Jazz´s old visor. Glory to the fallen ones.

"Do you know who that was?" the flyer whispered, awe-struck by the realization, "He was Cybertron's greatest ever saboteur."

Amazing...

Thank you for this story.

Wow, this one has to be my favorite so far of yours. Very poignant with it's message and it give me hope for the future of Cybertron and makes me appreciate those working for its future now.

Great story. :) What a nice view of Cybertron's future.

Aw... Sweet! That was a nice little story. I truly enjoyed it!

Jazz rulz!

aw beautiful.. and yes, Jazz is the greatest saboteur =)... nice little fic here

What a wonderfully endearing piece... Sweet and nostalgic with a hint of both sadness and awe. :) Way to go, Jazz.

Oh my God. That was beautiful. It made me tear up for no reason.

That's a really great little story. I figured out from the first 'man' that it was Jazz, but the little prank at the end was great.

I simply loved this. I knew who the old guy was when he talked about the sound system. Heh... ya know, the blue and silver mech must be Mirage's descendant. Talking about how he feels toward Earth, and the invisibility... Pure Mirage.

That's cool. ^_^ I guessed it was Jazz when he first spoke, but it was great that his name was never mentioned. The two kids are decended from Skywarp and Prowl, aren't they? ^_^