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| etlovestv 2007-02-28 ch 9, | abuseI hope you plan on finishing this story, I check regularly to see if it's been updated. this has been one of my favorite fanfictions. I think you capture the characters perfectly and can't wait for you to finish it. Even though, I'm assuming that Jack and Doug get together in the end, like they did in the show, I can't wait to see how that unfolds in your story. I hope you haven't given up on it, and the long break is due to just being busy with life. |
| velja 2006-11-12 ch 9, | abuseThis is really a great story with everyone very well In Character. I hope you're gonna update soon, I wanna know what comes next! Please, update! |
| Sam Cdn 2006-09-27 ch 9, | abuseHm ... Doug is making stupid decisions much too quickly! I want to jump into this story and shake him! Well, despite my frustration with Doug, I was very happy to see the continuation of this story posted at last! Keep those chapters coming ... I want more! Doug's dreams were really interesting ... I hope you continue to use those in the story to portray Doug's psychology. They can be very useful in showing certain truths about a character who is reluctant to admit those truths himself. I can't wait to read more! -Sam |
| darkelf1313 2006-09-10 ch 7, anon. | abuseit's cute actually. I really like this story hope to see more. |
| Broedy 2006-09-05 ch 7, | abuseI'm absolutely loving this story, which I've only just discovered - excellent characterisations, especially Doug. Love seeing his awkwardness as well as a softer side. (The "I am so tired of being lonely" line broke my heart!) Can't wait to see where you take this. even though we know where they end up on the show I'm still waited with baited breath to see how you bring them together. Here's the obligatory SQUEE! Sorry, I couldn't resist. :-) Hope you update soon. |
| Harleyzgirl 2006-09-01 ch 7, | abuseYou are forgiven only if a) the next one to two chapters are posted soon and b) you promise to add a warning at the beginning of the chapter for future ickyness. :) |
| ReRe04 2006-09-01 ch 7, | abuseInteresting chapter, though I'm sure it does play a role in the plot. Can't wait for the next update and I'm glad to hear Ernesto didn't get too bad down in Florida. We are seeing the effects of it here as I type. |
| fone67 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuseFabulous story, but when are you going to update? |
| gopie 2006-07-29 ch 6, | abuseVery interesting so far. |
| etlovestv 2006-07-23 ch 6, | abuseGlad to see that you've picked up the story again. Even though Doug and Jack were not my favorite characters on the show, their story have become the most interesting in fan fiction, and so far yours is one of my favorites. can't wait to read what happens. |
| Sam Cdn 2006-07-09 ch 6, | abuseYou're right: I was pleasantly surprised to see this story updated so quickly! I liked the easy conversation between Jack and Doug; you do a really good job of demonstrating the chemistry between them without being too obvious. Oh, and Pacey is an idiot: I don't care how sure you are that someone is going to stay alone forever, giving said person a cookbook titled Cooking for One is just mean! The only thing wrong with this chapter was that it was way too short! So we'll be getting an update soon, yes? :) -Sam |
| ReRe04 2006-07-08 ch 6, | abuseYay! An update and a recipe. What can beat that? Maybe another update. I'm lovin your story. :) |
| etlovestv 2006-06-29 ch 5, | abusei hope you continue to update this story, it's one of my favorite. Been checking back often to see if it'e been updated, and was thrilled when chapter 5 was finally posted. Jack and Doug were no my favorite characters on the show, but i think that's what makes your stories interesting. can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| Lady's Shade 2006-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like the way you tell the story. It's great to se how you make the characters personalities known throug little things taht they do, and by what they say. Looking forward to reading more :-) |
| ReRe04 2006-06-19 ch 5, | abuseWoo hoo for an update. I loved this chapter. I really liked your explanation as to what happened in NY. I hope you are able to add more to your story soon! :) |