Hi! I have just completed reading your series, and I have found it truely interesting! I would be so thrilled if you continued it, and did a sequel!
I know that this is a hard feat to acomplish, for I too am a writer. However, I have only just created this account, and I have to wait before I can put up a story. Either way, I have throughly enjoyed this fic. It was amusing, tragic, romantic, and many other things, including confusing at parts.
I loved this fic, and I look forward to future works from you!

im really confused wats happenin?whos christine?Gah!!

your..obsessed.so am i!!

Two words:Total Awesomeness.PLZ HURRY UP AND UPDATE!U have no idea.Ever since i first heard of this story i've been reading it and waiting forever for an update.So please make the update soon.Every1 else r&r for this nice author,ya'll hear me!?R&R for them!

o.o zomg..I frippin love this! -clings- Update? -puppy eyes- and as for you flamers,spoot on you! >:( ya wouldnt know an awesome story if it came up and slapped you in the face! -pokes thm mercillessly wif a pointy stick for insulting moony chan and her spiffeh story- you guys are just jealous :P

NO! I don't want it to end.No end No end! Soo fluffy. I love fluff.I love this story.

yay you updated now do it agein. I love this story.AW some Envy/christine fluff cute

cool I totaly LOVE this story. It is like the ONLY non yiuo(sp) story wiht Envy and I don't relly like yiuo(sp) so plot twist btw

First off, just because this is listed as a review from the last chapter, DO NOT assume I actually read this entire crap-pit of a fanfiction. If I had, I wouldn't be alive to do this...

One of the other reviewers already pointed out the fact that there is a distinct lack of wolf-demons in FMA, and another reviewer already pointed out the fact that Ebony is a retard. Seriously, if you wanted to write about wolf-demons, go add another piece of crap to the pile in the Inu Yasha section.

Why is it that people who write Mary Sues always want them to be all buddy-buddy with people who'd sooner kill them? I really don't get it.

If you are going to inflict this horrendous pile of pus upon us, at least do one of two things:

1. Save your author's notes till the end of the fic rather than sprinkling them throughout the freaking fic.

2. Try a grammar check and a spell check. Ebony may be a retard, but you can at least TRY to make this fic bearable to read.

Another thing, all of the Homonculus were not friends with eachother. Did you ever see Greed hanging out with the others being like 'hey guys, whats totly up!1' No. I didn't think so. The Homonculus are NOT HAPPY PEOPLE. In fact, they arn't techinically people at all.

Isn't it bad enough you put one retarded Mary Sue in here to begin with? One was far more than enough, but then you had to add in about 24,0 other ones AND Christmas. What the hell? Seriously, what the hell?! I don't think Christianity exists in FMA like it does in real life, fool.

How about that Ferrari? Where did it come from? Plot-Holes-R-Us? Give me a break! Or hey, maybe it came from the other side of the gate? But you know, since the other side is pre-WWII Europe, I don't think that's terribly likely either. Ugh. I hate unexplainable crap like...everything in this pathetic story.

Just do us all a favor and stop writing crap like this.

Now for some spontaneous poetry:
Roses are red
Violets are blue
One Mary Sue's bad enough
24,0 melts people's brains to a pile of goo.

Have a nice day.

Finally! Someone else who loves Envy-sama aswell! xD! Please update soon, it'll make me uber happy *nod nod*

SO COOL. Must read more. I love it. Aw Envy in love. poor little Wrath must miss her. don't let her die I COMAND YOU

Wow, this is looking great! please update soon!

Well Ebony is a retard.Doesn't she know not to read other peoples(especialy Envy's)things??And y would she be in the gate?Retarded.But,kan u pwease rite more?

OMG.

I had a character named Ebony. But Ebony is a name for black people (seriously) and she was white, so I changed her name.

Wolf demons? Uh...they aren't in FMA. And if you were part wolf, you'd have more than cute ears and a tail. You'd have fangs and claws and fur. But half-cat characters are always cutesy, with only tails and ears. Makes me want to vomit.

Wow!! I really like it! it's different, and I mean that in a good way!! please update!!