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| Lady Julie Snape 2008-07-16 ch 5, | abuseAgain, beautiful story. You put all us other writers to shame. Are you /sure/ you're not a real writer posing as one of us mortals? And don't you lie to me missy! ::shakes finger threateningly:: Whenver you have the time and if we pester you enough! I would love to read another of your stories - I've read them all and love every single one of them to death. How /do/ you do it? Oh, yes, one mroe thing: you promised us a third story in your Phoenix Flight series. So, my dear, where is it?! I would love to see more! Yours, Lady Julie Snape. |
| etherian 2008-05-08 ch 5, | abuseWow! I'm just stunned. I feel sorry that JKR didn't write this. You're a wonderful writer. |
| onaleia 2008-03-20 ch 5, anon. | abuseWhile I would love to read more, I have to admit that this story is perfect as a stand-alone. I do hope and would love to read a sequel. |
| Nienna Telrunya 2008-03-16 ch 5, | abuseThat was a rather unexpected ending, I'll grant. 1/8th vampire? Interesting turnabout. I did enjoy it, and was disappointed -- shocked, rather -- when I reached the bottom and saw it was the end. Still, I don't regret reading, and am content with your words . . . even though I wish for more. |
| Shadow Lighthawk 2007-12-18 ch 5, | abuseI think it's fascinating that you ended right there. I was actually gearing up for a novel, but after I got over the surprise of it, I really like where you stopped the story. I'm a happy ending junky. Unless the story is marked as uber-angsty, I usually assume there will *be* a happy ending. Plus, I have faith that the four of them, working together, can do just about anything. So, I really didn't *need* the novel. Of course I'd like to see how they work things out between them and what new dynamic might develop, but this little bit - it's almost like the first act of a play - is very satisfying all by itself. Well done. |
| Tamyka 2007-12-16 ch 5, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this story. I couldn't stop once I started. I wish the book had gone this way because I find it more believable actually. That or I'm just a sucker to see Harry and Snape and Draco work together. It'd be nice to have follow up piece but that's just a suggestion. Awesome job! |
| Angelfirenze 2007-12-16 ch 5, | abuseTHE END? NO! *wails* It's far too short. I deeply hope that you will be moved to write more in what could become a series eventually. That would be absolutely terrific and more than welcome. *sighs* |
| Angelfirenze 2007-12-16 ch 4, | abuseThis is beyond words. It's completely different from canon, but still wonderfully SNAPE'S POINT OF VIEW. Your scenes read just as poignantly as everything we saw in DH did for me. If I wasn't tired, I might be crying right now. Brilliance. |
| Angelfirenze 2007-12-15 ch 2, | abuseThis is so awesome. I can't even bring myself to go to bed because I'd have to stop reading it. You've done masterfully, doling out suspense and the sense of horror and/or resignation amongst the characters so well, it's nearly unbelievable. This definitely deserved to go on my favorites' list. |
| Angelfirenze 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseI really, really like this take on what happened after 'HBP'. It takes everything I believe about Draco and Severus to a wonderful new level. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| UltimateProcrastinator 2007-12-07 ch 5, | abusethis was alot of fun to read, you managed to keep some level of humor. i especially liked the last few sentences about dumbledore and sirius playing cards. |
| crockywock 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseFantastic. No question. Decidedly one of the best takes on Draco and Snape I've seen out there. I don't have enough time to read and review the rest now, but I'll put this on my author's alert list etc. Thanks! |
| Miss Eliza Azraelian 2007-07-22 ch 5, | abuseTha-That's it? *pout* How terribly disappointing. I like how you write, the way the characters interact. Thanks! - Miss. |
| serenity 2007-07-12 ch 5, anon. | abusethats it? thats all your gunna do. i actually liked this story, i wuz expecting something a bit longer. PLEASE PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL SOON. your a good writer, just so you know. a good thought on the upcoming 7nth book. i hope it actually turns out that way. can wait for your next story hint hint. |
| ode to melancholy 2007-06-28 ch 5, | abuseI truly hope this will happen in the last book. It HAS to!! I will be disappointed otherwise (and that is what your stories have done to me). |