a mini fic>? what the fish? I was waiting for both snape and draco andharry to go on some epic adventures and then your just DONE writing? its a good peice of work but its just not satisfying gosh know ill wonder what happens when harry comes home to ron and hermione and i hope snape will let them come along with Harry im glad harry is in charchater for the most part in this story over all great job! but really sad ur not continuing

OMG!
I seriously believed I was reading J K Rowling! You have some serious talent! Everything fitted so well! Sorry I'm using exclamation marks after every sentence.
Honestly, it was so professional!

Just one thing I wanted to know, is this the first one and is the phoenix's flight the second and the Ankh if Khepri the third? Sorry =P

But again, seriously outstanding! Really inspirational!
ARGHH LOVED IT
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Again, beautiful story.

You put all us other writers to shame. Are you /sure/ you're not a real writer posing as one of us mortals? And don't you lie to me missy! ::shakes finger threateningly::

Whenver you have the time and if we pester you enough! I would love to read another of your stories - I've read them all and love every single one of them to death. How /do/ you do it? Oh, yes, one mroe thing: you promised us a third story in your Phoenix Flight series. So, my dear, where is it?!

I would love to see more!

Yours,
Lady Julie Snape.

Wow! I'm just stunned. I feel sorry that JKR didn't write this. You're a wonderful writer.

While I would love to read more, I have to admit that this story is perfect as a stand-alone. I do hope and would love to read a sequel.

That was a rather unexpected ending, I'll grant. 1/8th vampire? Interesting turnabout. I did enjoy it, and was disappointed -- shocked, rather -- when I reached the bottom and saw it was the end. Still, I don't regret reading, and am content with your words . . . even though I wish for more.

I think it's fascinating that you ended right there. I was actually gearing up for a novel, but after I got over the surprise of it, I really like where you stopped the story.

I'm a happy ending junky. Unless the story is marked as uber-angsty, I usually assume there will *be* a happy ending. Plus, I have faith that the four of them, working together, can do just about anything. So, I really didn't *need* the novel. Of course I'd like to see how they work things out between them and what new dynamic might develop, but this little bit - it's almost like the first act of a play - is very satisfying all by itself. Well done.

I really enjoyed reading this story. I couldn't stop once I started. I wish the book had gone this way because I find it more believable actually. That or I'm just a sucker to see Harry and Snape and Draco work together. It'd be nice to have follow up piece but that's just a suggestion. Awesome job!

THE END? NO! *wails* It's far too short. I deeply hope that you will be moved to write more in what could become a series eventually. That would be absolutely terrific and more than welcome. *sighs*

This is beyond words. It's completely different from canon, but still wonderfully SNAPE'S POINT OF VIEW. Your scenes read just as poignantly as everything we saw in DH did for me. If I wasn't tired, I might be crying right now. Brilliance.

This is so awesome. I can't even bring myself to go to bed because I'd have to stop reading it. You've done masterfully, doling out suspense and the sense of horror and/or resignation amongst the characters so well, it's nearly unbelievable. This definitely deserved to go on my favorites' list.

I really, really like this take on what happened after 'HBP'. It takes everything I believe about Draco and Severus to a wonderful new level. I can't wait to see what happens next.

this was alot of fun to read, you managed to keep some level of humor. i especially liked the last few sentences about dumbledore and sirius playing cards.

Fantastic. No question. Decidedly one of the best takes on Draco and Snape I've seen out there. I don't have enough time to read and review the rest now, but I'll put this on my author's alert list etc.

Thanks!

Tha-That's it? *pout* How terribly disappointing. I like how you write, the way the characters interact. Thanks!

- Miss.