Nice mini-story! I noticed that Draco should have figured out that Snape had something to do with the spell, since he knew what came after the sectum in Sectumsomething!

This was a great story. You really have to feel sorry for Severus, being left alone in all of this mess most of the time.

That's a wonderful mini-story. I believe a lot of people were disappointed to be left hanging after the abrupt ending. I pity Severus for being burdened by all the responsibilities. Even in the book he died an undeserved death after being the hugest factor that contributes to the winning act itself. Regardless, your story was a beautiful one. I felt horrible and sad for Severus.

You. Are. A. Tease. A tease! I expected a fantastic novel of Snape/ Harry/ Draco loveliness and instead, only a snapshot of how awesome this could be. ): very upsetting, I could totally use an amazing novel of not necessarily severitus. But this was fantastic so I'll forgive you for not making this into a lengthy novel! Thank you for such a fantastic experience!

Superb!

Should have gone this way. Dumbledore should have left something behind that explained Severus' role.

What an intriguing turn of events!

Truly superb!

Excellent start!

a mini fic? what the fish? I was waiting for both snape and draco andharry to go on some epic adventures and then your just DONE writing? its a good peice of work but its just not satisfying gosh know ill wonder what happens when harry comes home to ron and hermione and i hope snape will let them come along with Harry im glad harry is in charchater for the most part in this story over all great job! but really sad ur not continuing

OMG!

I seriously believed I was reading J K Rowling! You have some serious talent! Everything fitted so well! Sorry I'm using exclamation marks after every sentence.

Honestly, it was so professional!

Just one thing I wanted to know, is this the first one and is the phoenix's flight the second and the Ankh if Khepri the third? Sorry P

But again, seriously outstanding! Really inspirational!

ARGHH LOVED IT

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Again, beautiful story.

You put all us other writers to shame. Are you /sure/ you're not a real writer posing as one of us mortals? And don't you lie to me missy! ::shakes finger threateningly::

Whenver you have the time and if we pester you enough! I would love to read another of your stories - I've read them all and love every single one of them to death. How /do/ you do it? Oh, yes, one mroe thing: you promised us a third story in your Phoenix Flight series. So, my dear, where is it?

I would love to see more!

Yours,

Lady Julie Snape.

Wow! I'm just stunned. I feel sorry that JKR didn't write this. You're a wonderful writer.

While I would love to read more, I have to admit that this story is perfect as a stand-alone. I do hope and would love to read a sequel.

That was a rather unexpected ending, I'll grant. 1/8th vampire? Interesting turnabout. I did enjoy it, and was disappointed - shocked, rather - when I reached the bottom and saw it was the end. Still, I don't regret reading, and am content with your words . . . even though I wish for more.