i wish you would continue this story.

um ya, i was just wondering. are you ever going to finish this story because i really like it and i really love ryan and marissa so i really want you to finish it!

OMG! Well at least you got RM back together Find Madison though too k?

Ryan would never cheat on Marissa!

Update! Update!
I hope you didnt abandon this story or something, because it says 'complete' on the top.

...either that or I have some serious hallucination problems :P

^-^ I love Marissas 'bazooka' accusation. It was hilarious.
I hope Maddy will be all right!
update

YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE! (if the next one has a different name please please tell me!)
~Ally

this is really good!
youre really good at writing! hope to see your post soon.
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its really good, but if you want some spice you could add more descriptive vocab but its really thrilling to read.

please continue

oh my god, this was a really good chapter, please update soon. i think that Marissa should be pregant.

omg major cliffy! i must know what happens next. and ur story isnt bad...i love it! its one of my favs on the site! so please continue writing it

No! Not a cliffy... argh

Lol, I love it how you manage to incorporate humour into an angsty story, it's so cool! Like Madison expecting an elephant to turn up and dance for her birthday, heehee.

The only off thing about that chapter is I think that if Marissa was really intent on not sending Maddy to that childcare because she had a premonition, then Ryan would probably listen to her. I mean, he trusts people less than she does. He's always suspicious of everyone. But it's a cool storyline anyway. Suspenseful!

And thank you for the massive warning about the episode spoiler, lol. I managed to not read it! :D YAY!

Heehee

Omg! Freeaky!! Update soon!

ah!! its Lost finale flash backs! don't kidnap kids! ah!

sorry, little spasm. just don't have Madison come back saying "Don't push the button" backwards. God, I'm so pathetic.

Really good chapter. Freaked me out.

ah. I hope Maddy is OK. I'm so happy to hear that RM are back. Please continue!

Good chapter, I just hope that she will be rescued soon, and that they will finally have some happy times.

Update soon.