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Anonymous
2007-07-17
ch 4, anon.
abuseso everything in chapter three happened FOR REAL? O M G NO WAY!

you must be the unluckiest person in the world

i feel sorry for youT_T

i'm sure you'll make a lot of friends soon!

stay happy and great story! ^_^ >_
.twilighter.sabby.
2007-06-16
ch 13,
abuseit was a really good story! i enjoyed it! :D
yukyungtang
2007-03-31
ch 13,
abuseit was an enjoyable story :) god i wish i can write as well as you! ^__^ now i'll go check out ur other stories~~ :)
yukyungtang
2007-03-31
ch 10,
abusehey..well hopefully you don't still feel this way...but i hope you'll feel better. i'm sure there are people out there just for you as friends or mayb even more?

"When love seems to have left you, and you feel so all alone. Remember there is someone, you can call your very own. For you may have yet to meet them, but they are there for sure. that very special someone, who opens your heart's door"

pretty sappy..i know...(i didn't write it.) but i hope that passes on the message i wanted to :)

plus. you alwayz have us, your readers by your side, cheering you on~ we may not know each other in RL but at least even across the internet there are ppl there for you eh?~~

wellz thatz all i wanted to say...hope you feel better. and i sure hope u hav already..since this is like 2 yrs after the story is written? well hope it will help you feel better whenever the need then.
lil mz pursun
2007-02-01
ch 13,
abusethis is the weirdest story i hav ever read but i really like it.
ilovelife1993
2006-09-30
ch 2,
abusegood story
Jedi Lord -Author-
2006-09-29
ch 13,
abuseI must say...that was a very good story..good ending..good discriptions and such... I really hate to ask but... The Angels of Death? I have been wondering for awhile now... do you know whatever happened to the person who kept the e-mail of kenny's grounded all the time? now known as it's deleted... I noticed this awhile ago... and I really am wondering... whatever happened to that perticular author?
I'm just wondering...that's all... if you have any knowledge... that would be greatly appreciated...I mean were/are you one of the only one's who know?..if so please can you e-mail me?... I would love to know what happened to that perticular person...so without wittering on and talking sensusly about someone else, and talking about things which may not even concern me I bid you ferwell for now...

Sayonara,
For Now At Least,
Jedi Lord -Author-
Jacqulin
2006-08-18
ch 13,
abusethis story made me laugh too much
PCD
2006-07-23
ch 13, anon.
abusehm yea um yea i lliked it lol soz bout all da long words and ** jst couldnt help ma self =)
rebelrose1115
2006-05-08
ch 13,
abusetotal randomness! I LOVE IT. even though it never really made any sense! i love randomness. i love people that write randomly! KAWAI!
Kokari
2006-04-01
ch 13,
abuse...wow... lol that was too funny! Not all the parts but fujitaka? rofl, there's not much romance in it though. You should probably change the genre to humor(sp?) and angst... wierd to put together. I really enjoyed your story keep writing! pleasepleasepleaseplease! lol sugar is better than regular food tho...
KawaiiSakuraAngel
2006-01-11
ch 13,
abuseahhahaha, completely random, but interesting.

..not to be mean, but from a critical standpoint (I'm better at criticizing than complementing), I think.. you might want to add a few more details. I know you're trying to go for humor with the style, but sometimes things just pop out of nowhere, and I don't know what's really going on. Try to slow down just a little for the clueless people. ;)

otherwise, good job ^^ keep writing!

2006-01-11
ch 3, anon.
abuseI know it's generally premature to post a comment on the 3rd chapter if the story's already completed, but I just wanted to tell you that... I know exactly how you feel, and the exact same thing happened to me- they were only my friends when our parents were around. In school, I had nobody, not even the girl who used to be my best friend. (Yeah.. we're "friends" now, and she doesn't remember ditching me at all, but I really don't hate her for it.)

Anyway, I'm just glad that there's finally a story that I can really relate to, and I want to thank you for writing it, so.. thanks.

..and sorry if I've annoyed you with all that gibberish.
SawatariK
2005-12-26
ch 13,
abuseHeyya! I'm. Sawatari. Call me Sawa. I'm one of Shuana's friends. So.. Yea. I loved your story. Ah crap. I'm your 1th reviewer. You can now love me. Haha. I'm kidding xD I can say you do have a very good sense of humor. And the one bout the. "Hi. I'm Yukino Matsura, and I'm going to sit behind you in class forver. Shall I laugh evilly? It fits the mood." Thing. I can. Let's see. I can remember the whole thing. Haha. I practically rolled of my chair laughing so hardly. But I had to get some ice cream half way through. And my pocky. *hugs her pocky protectively* But. I can share it with you and Shuana. I guess. You're a nice girl. No wonder Shuana love ya. I think. o_o So now. Me. Sawatari, a girl. Shall propose to you. Will you marry me for the sake of sharing of pocky and cheese? Nah. I'm kidding. Haha. Would love to hear more of your stories even though I don't really write much. Cya round!
Wilted Paper Flowers
2005-12-20
ch 13,
abuseOh. My. Gawd. That was so **' hilarious!! (excuse the profanity..XD) It made me laugh so hard, I couldn't breathe properly. Randomness..how i worhip thee...XP

~Magz

P.S. this is going in my fave stories!
P.P.S. please write another new story!!
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