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smarmy-ass-bitch 2008-05-06 ch 17,	abusei LOVE this fic! great job with the characters! wonderfully written and great plot! one thing though, after what Nick went through when he was a kid, i think Ken's 'interest' in him would have a deeper impact in him. thats all. thanks for a great read!
weimfriend 2007-01-18 ch 17,	abuseGreat story, had me on the edge of my seat, loved it
Deep October 2007-01-05 ch 17,	abuseHey, just finished your story. A little tired now... it took its time and it really late now. Had something I wanted to point out that I enjoyed, may have been something with their different answering machines... in character. Well, anyway, great story. Thanks for keeping me up all night.
Truth Reader 2006-10-09 ch 17,	abuseI really enjoyed this story! I think you're a very talented author, but one thing really turned me off this story. I think the title should be "Breathe for me", not "Breath for me". I also think that may turn a lot of people off the story before they read it because they automatically see that the title doesn't use proper grammar, and they think the story won't use proper grammar either. Anyways, if you just change the title to "Breathe for me" then it would be a damn near perfect story!
AlexCurtis 2006-06-19 ch 17,	abusegood
AlexCurtis 2006-06-19 ch 1,	abusegood
Shika.Tot 2006-05-18 ch 17,	abuseI liked your story, and i like how Nick wasn't all depressed liked in most other stories like this. Good Job!
chituhr 2006-03-20 ch 17,	abuseExcellent story. You had me hooked at the first chapter. Keep up the GREAT story writing. (I just LOVE Nick stories!)
astalder27 2006-02-23 ch 17,	abuseGreat job! I loved it! Very intense and suspensefull! I love your Nick and Warrick, terrific job on all of the characters actually! (like Ken, man was he creepy! Poor Nick, he is so unlucky!) Cant wait to read your next story...its too bad i should go to bed now, hmm..well maybe ill just have a peek (hehe)
Dannyvangeline 2006-01-17 ch 1,	abuseThat should be "breathe" (the verb, not the noun).
Me 2005-11-27 ch 15, anon.	abuseNice, angsty story, but you could really use a good edit. The title alone should be "Breathe For Me", not "Breath for me". With a little tweaking and a thorough edit, many of the (quite numerous) grammar boos that hinder the story could be fixed. I also found some of the dialogue stilted - you tend not to use contractions, which most people use quite heavily in speech. If you read the dialogue out loud and don't know anyone who speaks that way... I'm not trying to be a downer, because you do have potential as a storyteller. I'm just a stickler for grammar.
csistokesfan 2005-09-21 ch 17, anon.	abuseBravo! Bravo! Encore! Encore! This was the absolute best! I am looking forward very much to the next story. If it is only half as good as this one, it would still be rated as outstanding. The title of the next story has me anxious with anticipation. I love your writing style. Your stories have such depth to the characters and the storyline is kept to a good pace without getting bogged down with extranaous info that is not needed. As long as you keep writing, I will keep avidly reading/reviewing. Bravo.
Mma63 2005-09-21 ch 17,	abuseWow...great friendship story! Very intense. Really like it besides the pain you caused to our loved boys. The chemistry between those two characters are such fascinating, hope the writers and the producers of the show could explore more it. Thank you very much for sharing it. Happy to know you're working a next ff. Love the summary, can't wait to read it. Go ahead.
Karen 2005-09-21 ch 17, anon.	abuseYou really did a great job with this story and I looked foreard to each chapter. I think you really showed how closer Nick and Warick are and how they feel when the other is hurt or injured. After reading about your new story and I looking forward to reading it. Thanks for an amazing story.
dumbandhappy 2005-09-21 ch 17,	abusegreat story looking forward to ur next one

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