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| Kioji 2005-12-20 ch 5, | abuseLol. You've got my review! Please don't make Clavis/Claire change into a guy! lol. It's interesting as her as a girl. Lol. Great job! |
| Lan 2005-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseClavis as a girl. (pauses, then tries again) Clavis as a GIRL. (pauses again, then starts cackling and falls over) Well, this story could use some work...I don't think that Julious is so friendly - as a matter of fact according to game canon (on Marfisa's Angelique Site, at least), Julious becomes so upset about Clavis replacing the previous Guardian of Dark and he ends up traumatizing him. Her. Whatever. |
| Kioji 2005-11-26 ch 4, | abuse...You're going to think of me as some kind of stalker, but I like your stories. lol. Do go on with this one. ^^ I found the profile button so now I can go hunt down other people's stories! yee! Sorry, I'm tired and it's 10 pm here. lol. |
| Lizabeth 2005-10-11 ch 4, anon. | abuseI didnt think there was anything wrong with it. But then I havent played Angelique before. And I didnt bother to go to the marfisa page that you had on yor profile. |
| yami sakura 2005-09-23 ch 3, anon. | abusecreepy... clavis isn't like that!! and he doesn't look like a girl, unlike some other people (eg lumiale). but thinking that one of the guardians is really is kind of fun... *dream* but why clavis? he's not the most feminine one if you ask me. |