|Reviews for The Hart of the Matter|
| mae-E 12/29/12 . chapter 1
this was very cool story! glad to see how everything worked out.
| psycochick32 12/6/09 . chapter 1
It's time for another one of my not-quite-patented long-ass rambly reviews!
I have a bad habit of reading things dozens of times, having them sit in my mind until I go crazy thinking about them, and then forgetting to review.
Then, like this fic, I stumble back upon them ages later and realize I have yet to sing the story's praises.
For this fic (and probably a few others - I went through your profile and have about a dozen tabs open, LOL), I shall rectify that particular mistake now!
First of all, I can't wait to read "Amen." I'd like to see Tommy and Katherine talk to each other - in the end, what they went through is painful, but lead to happiness for both. It's never good to just settle; were they to push it and marry, that's what they would do.
I can't decide what I like more - Tommy's run-in with John or Kim's meeting with Kat. It was really good of Kim to go straight to Katherine; she had to know the other woman would pick up on her feelings and call her out, and did it anyway. Plus, she refused to get upset or react negatively when Kat smacked her one, even if she'd be justified.
They're sisters in more than color, and I think you portrayed that beautifully.
Meanwhile, I love how Tommy wouldn't just give John the okay, the forgiveness. Being cheated on hurts, and it's worse when it's somebody you trusted and believed in. Tommy isn't perfect and you do a great job of capturing how *real* people are.
Please never, ever change!
Again, absolutely fabulous work. I didn't review the first (whoops!) and I apologize - but I can't wait to read more. That being said - onto the next tab!
| Itachi's aprentice 11/9/08 . chapter 1
| slytherensangel26 6/8/08 . chapter 1
damn that was good.
| PinkRanger4Evr 10/13/05 . chapter 1
Wow to long but good. I love this chapter please update as soon as possible. great chapter
| Cranelove 8/17/05 . chapter 1
Sorry, I forgot when I emailed you tell you what I think about the story.
I love it, you know it's funny I had an experience like that years ago, let's just say It didn't end so well; But now I'm older and your story really helped me to see my mistakes, and you totally got me with the Karting thing, I loved Karting I used to practice when i was a child, but I never used Kim's distractions to win a race,i didn't have anything in that moment and I think the rules dodn't alow that.*lol*
Great job as always
| C2 8/11/05 . chapter 1
another awsome story shawn. Keep up the good work. The only thing I might ask is for a bit of clarity on the Kim/Kat "fight" where they are yelling at each other right before the slap. You have about 4 lines w/out speakers and each time I try to go back and figure out who said what I can't. Any thoughts?
I'm not criticizing, just expressing my "blondeness" as a good friend put it earlier.
| Giggles18 8/11/05 . chapter 1
yay another great story! I always love reading your stories! Keep on writing!