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drkAnglZhaphire
2008-03-29
ch 14,
abuseHI!... i read the story and it was fantastic... i keep LOL!
you're so great.. did you know that? anyway... the thing that puzzled me was what happened to KUrama? i mean, you did not clear out waht is happening to kurama? and i dont have any clue.. care for a sequel?
Keiko Fujiwara
2008-02-22
ch 14,
abuseLOVED IT!
Seresid
2007-11-05
ch 3,
abuseHeeheehee. I love watching male characters put in awkward positions, don't you?

x]

Great job so far.
Seresid
2007-11-05
ch 1,
abuseHahaha. I totally caught that demon slayer thing. Sango, of course!

I love where this is going. Or maybe it's just where my perverted mind is telling me to go.

Either way, I'm going to be reading the rest!

Good job with all the grammar and shutff. :]
jenna
2007-08-10
ch 4, anon.
abuseTenou Haruka?
varon
2007-08-08
ch 14,
abuseoh, deliciously entertaining and well-written. :) love all the yuskei bits, and the humor the rest of the gang provides (kurama, hiei and kuwabara, especially). going to my faves! thanks so much for posting :)


xoxo,
varon
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Toku Tenshi
2007-06-05
ch 14,
abusefirst off, i cant believe I got question 2 right! although i did screw up q7... the honeymoon was for all o august, the wedding was before it. i could only rember from what kurama said in the 3 kings saga...

anyways, on to a real reveiw. YOU MADE ME STAY UP UNTIL 230AM! I got work at 8 ya know, shame on you for getting me hooked on this fic and making me read it in one sitting. gr.

im so tired, but i feel that i really need to congratulate you on this awesome fic - not only is it funny and serious at the same time but its complete! im a horrible author and cant seem to bring myself to finish two of my fics... so i kinda stopped updating them... Im trying to finish them now but since its been a year since the last update i dont think i have any readers any more... crap.

oh well, you did a great job and made a great addition to the series. i felt disapointed when i finished watching it this morning and had one of those 'thats it?' moments but this but me at ease.
(i had watched yyh back when it was on CN, but i never saw past the semifinals of the dark tornament. my bro recently got a hold of all the show and i watched it in like... a week or less. now i have nothing to watch again... i hate being cought up with fansubbers...)
Toku Tenshi
2007-06-05
ch 7,
abusei used to think tat keiko called her 'aunt suko' but i now realize that it is...

answer: atsuko
Toku Tenshi
2007-06-05
ch 6,
abuseanswer: august and suichi was nice enough to give them a month long honeymoon.
Toku Tenshi
2007-06-05
ch 5,
abuseanswer: true-ish... i wasnt able to watch the japanese version b/c the subtitles wouldnt load, but in the english version he did say 'i'm flautered but i dont think of you that way' or something to that effect when hiei handed him yukina's necklace
Toku Tenshi
2007-06-05
ch 4,
abuseanswer: shinji ikari from neon genisis evangelion who seems vastly different from kurama... but the the role of sailor uranus/haruka tenoh is more like kurama.
Toku Tenshi
2007-06-05
ch 3,
abuseanswer: episode 97! and he did it right in front of her dad too - silly dad thought it was a joke...
Toku Tenshi
2007-06-05
ch 2,
abuseholy crap, VA questions? uh, im gonna guess here with john burgmeier. their voices sound simular to me... 9_9
Toku Tenshi
2007-06-05
ch 1,
abuseanswer: well, since you say inuyasha then it must be sango and miroku
Tellemicus Sundance
2006-11-20
ch 14,
abuseHeh, good ending. Though, I can't help but to ask if you could possibly write up another Yusuke/Keiko story of this caliber. I love that pairing but there's a horrible lacking in that area for some reason.

Need some new ideas for a new story? Here, I'll give you mine since I doubt I'll ever write a YYH story.
1) What if Yusuke had been born/raised in Makai with Raizen?
2) What if Yusuke was a mute due to an accident in his infancy years? He only can talk when he's a ghost and when he comes back to life the second time.
3)What if Keiko had died that first time instead of Yusuke, and thus became the Spirit Detective?

Well, that's basically all of them.
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