Oh my gosh, this is a hilarious story-- please continue! My only suggestion is to modify the part in this chapter about the smoking in restaurants-- the exact same rule has been in effect in California for most of my lifetime (I'm in my 20s), so it's unlikely that Dawn would notice a major difference. Just my two cents though. This story is fabulously witty! Keep it up!

Have you even STUDIED Canada?!

Just wondering, are you from Vancouver? That would be SO COOL. I live in Kelowna.

I LOVE this story! It's way better than the proper books! I really like the way you portay Abby as well, because she doesn't really feature much in the stories. PLEASE update soon!

Wow! This is great so far! You write just like Ann Martin. I wish I could see Claudia wearing a stuffed polar bear on her head - she'd look HILARIOUS. I mean, I know she's an artist and everything, but a stuffed toy...

I love it. This kind of story is my favorite to read. Sidenote: You can't smoke in California inside either.

"Maybe your mom should have lived here"

Comedy GOLD my friend. Gold.

honestly, at the moment, i dont care about your story. im the auther of if i would have know the futer. and i think your revwew was quite rude. you are intatled to your apinun. and i dont want you to think that your not. but i think you should revwew my work. not my choise on ware to PUT my work. this is ware im putting my work, and if you dont like it, youll have to deal with it. so im sorry if i sound rude, but you sounded rude too.

Go dawn...vegan nachos

Oh good, Dawn's found a cause to support finally she'll have someone to hang out with that's as crazy about imvirmental issue's and animil's rights. Not that I don't support anemal's. Sue all the cute one's should live haha specialy the cute koala's that get killed for there fur. Anyway update please this is totaly wonderful!

"Jessi nodded in agreement. She knows all about oppression."

of course she does, being black and all!
that's my favorite quote in this chapter though, I think :]

great story. you have good ideas for the chapters, good spelling/grammar/punctuation skills, and whatever else you need to write a good story! I really like this and look forward to reading more chapters of it :D

is caro a lesbian? Claudia is so dippy! This is cool

Klaudia Kishi Kreation - hahaha, that is so classic! I love your work, please update soon!

Haha this is a great parody...I know Caro is gay for Janine and that was funny about Claud and the tempature and Jesse being overly sensitive about rascism. Write more soon!

I just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story. The "Klaudia Kishi Kreation" bit had me cracking up. I can't wait to find out what sort of situations Dawn and Stacey are going to get themselves into!