very engaging story.

most times schemes like that have a tendency to turn around and bite one in the butt. very fun story (i can't believe i hadn't reviewed it a long time ago).

since i noticed that you've written 'rurouni kenshin' wanted to share something wonderful (if you hadn't heard already), please remove space:

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enjoy!

This story was amazingly awesome! :D

Love the way you write! Sentences flow together so smoothly. This story was a pleasure to read and will always remain one of my favourite one-shots!

Oh shippou.. Hehe loved it!

OH MY GODNESS! IAM IN LOVE WITH IT, ITS SO ADORABLE! I LOVE THE IDEA !

I liked very much, very good and funny like all of your stories

That was brilliant! And I loved InuYasha's exclamation of love; it was so in character!

Great job )

The shippou bits are so funny. LOL!

Awesome story! I loved how it ended with Shippo who was completely lost! Awesome job!

-d101

ha ha too funny! I loved the Fiddler on the roof line. and the whole dont try to con a con artist. XD hee hee

I love you. Or rather, to make that less creepy, I love this one-shot. Through I can easily point out many moments that struck me as brilliant, I'll point out only one. This version of Inuyasha's confession has got to be one of the best ones I've ever read.

Very cute. Maybe a bit of a character stretch, but it has to happen eventually, and this is as good a way as any. I really enjoyed it.

Its such a cute story.

Heaps original too.

Congrats

ah i loved shippo part in this