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Me likey the ending name mix-up. That's what I thought too when I saw the movie. It took me forever to realize that his name was Warren Peace.

I love your name for Warren. And, on a totally random note, I just realized that if you do an initials thing and scramble it, you get STD. Which I'm sure he doesn't have. But yeah. Anyway, love the appa joos!

Now this is a Sky High Masterpiece...keep it up!

Awaiting your next...

Can't...stop...laughing...

*dies laughing* Appa joos, and that's why one should NEVER speak baby talk to a child..

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*falls over laughing*

Once again, claps for you. Great job, and I notice that you are using a few characters that have been floating around a bit...sweet. Im doing the same as well, and I also ask for some people to read and review, so I have an idea as to what to improve on for the next chapter.

Awaiting your next.

OMG! So adorable. I love the characters and the camo by Lash. I love it. Its so good. I can't wait for the next installment, so stop reading this and get to work!
Request please?=Layla and Warren and Wiill camo or sub-charcters appearence?//

I like where this is going...Lash a bus driver...hilarious...and I have noticed the different assortment of powers going around with every story...we could be our own class!

You're off to a decent start. I like your characters and their background.
Hmm. I wonder what will Boomer do to a pre-cog in Power Placement.

Haha- great start!

This story is GREAT! I love all of the characters and the storyline has me in stitches...oops, sorry, no pun intended ;) My favorite part is the first paragraph heheh. And "I never said I was an intelligent child" haha! Great! Keep going!