Fascinating to do the same story from both perspectives. I think I like Sara's better-this one is a bit more wordy than I think Grissom might be-but still quite enjoyable. Poor baby.

Okay, so I thought for a second that you had accidently reposted Touch, but I now see that this is a kind of expansion piece.

The add-ins do a good job enriching the story line. Well done!

Make me weep now-what a sad but sweet story!

I love that Gris finally broke through-and that

Sara listened and saw his heart open to her.

Very good-what a romantic choice of words! Thanks!