update soon this is awsome

Mmhm, that's a nice twist to the video game. I like it! ('Course, I prefer using the name 'Seth' for the hero. But that's just me)
I like this story!
-DC-

Nice. ANd isn't the game Gale of Darkness? Or am I just dillusional? I think I need glasses...
-DC-

please continue ok

i have heard this before on the pokemon collesum game

it was a good story but i think i have heard it before havent we

Wow.
I like the games Colloseum and Gale of Darkness.
I wrote my story on it too.
Keep updating... I'm looking forward to it

awsome fic keep it up 9/10

I like what you have going on here. You may be basically telling us the entire story of pokemon colosseum but your doing it in a unique way. A few places to work on is the pokemon fights. Try to put a bit more detail into them and let them last a bit longer than just making it quick. You have a neat thing going on here so keep up the good work and hope to see a new chapter soon.

Nice intro. But why was everything underlined?

Great story! Hope you update soon!

What took you so long? Any way I like where you're going.

I like keep going.

A pretty good start! I liked the way of how you used of what happened to both wes and Rui. I'm looking foward to the next chapter.

this is cool. update soon.