cool story! Please please update soon and dont leave it at this! It is way to much of a cliffy! 0.o you better update NOW! ;-)

WHAT? YOU'RE ENDING IT NOW?! NOO! You can't do that! Vittoria was too cool to die!

what! update!

dun-dun-dun. Bad, Felipe! BAD! lol, keep going

wow! this is a brilliant story- it has the makings for a really good story! just a couple of things though- robert doesnt die does he? and... please make him propose at the end that would be adorable! lol sorry im a romantic bye

ps LOVE IT! PLEASE CONTINUE! =D

A bit short...yet very good chapter!

so far this has a really good plot but I'd like to see more interaction between Vittoria and Sophie

~Al

Moving a little too fast. Also, the characters are a little out of character. Other than that and a few grammer mistakes...well done.

Vittoria/Langdon forever!! They were meant to be! :)

This is very interesting. I hope you update soon.

I am really enjoying this fan fiction. I think it is following Dan Brown's faced paced writing style very well. It is almost clichéd though, that you would add Sophie and Vittoria into the same plot. I would have suggested using an all new co-protagonist. Keep up the good work though!

(PS Good luck with school. I too am bogged won with a lot of work.)

Yeah know the feeling. I'm sitting my A levels now. Nasty things they are.

Anyways, I'm glad you didn't abandon this story! I like it so far. Have you been to see the Da Vinci code at the cinema yet? If so, what did you think of it? I thought compared to other screenplay adaptations (like Harry Potter) it followed the book quite well.

Update soon! :)

and what a teaser...you cant leave us hanging like that for long. Update soon and great job.

Very interesting story...Please update soon and kill Vittoria, yes? ;)

Cool story!

Well, this is certainly going somewhere. I must say, it's very well written and thought through, and I wouldn't mind reading what is coming next. I like how you've managed to keep all of Langdon, Vittoria, and Sophie is character, because it's important for such strong entities.
A word of advice, just watch your grammar. Everyone needs to, now and then.
I really would love to read the next chapter! ;)
(p.s - i like Vittoria better!)