this is really good. very descriptive. can't wait to read more

One word for this story: wow. This is so amazing. I am astounded by your dedication and attention to detail to write this story. Keep up the awesome work! I hope Square enix or Disney accepts your manuscript because, one way or another, I really want to read the whole thing. Again, amazing work!

oh... are you gonna have Sora fight Sephiroth?

by the way. this is probably one of the best stories i've read on this site, keep it up! and update!

This is wonderful and you are SO good at describing things, but since I am a huge KH fan I spy a few mistakes. The heartless' eyes are yellow. You end up having Selphie and Wakka ask the same thing. Wakka actually asks, "What do you want outta life?" And what happened to the barrel, the crate, and the treasure chest? ( I liked that part. And wouldn't Tidus say "You are afraid of getting old." instead of wakka and wakka says "You wan to see rare sights."? This is some of the best fanfic i've ever read, it's beautiful! I'm just picky when it comes to recreating KH.

THANK GOD! Finally, someone who can actually write a good Novelisation of the game... But in this case, ITS GREAT. Keep it up!

i really do love your writing style. love what you did with the Gummi ship crashing on Deep Jungle. i totally didn't think of something like that... i feel like you're doing a better job of novelizing KH than me! XP

well, us KH novelizing people gotta stick together, right? keep at this! i know i'm not giving up 'til i've done the whole game! *does the nice guy pose*

Sora: I've noticed you've changed your name...

Yami: -_- Shut up, baka keybearer...

Sora and Kairi: I am/he is not!

Yami: _ See? You two were meant for each other!

Sora and Kairi: *blush*

Yami: PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PRETTY PLEASE! PRETTY PLEASE WITH WHATEVER ON TOP! JUST UPDATE SOON CUZ THIS IS SO AWESOME!

*rubbs back of neck modestly* It was nothing. Your welcome. De nada. I don't know how to say it in the other two languages so...do itashimashite.

Great chapter as always. I for one definately liked when Jane snapped Clayton and started writting that note for his removal. It was priceless!

Great story, and great chapter! I'm bookmarking this story.

Also, the quote that you requested...it goes,

'Your journey begins in the dead of night. Your road won’t be easy, but a rising sun awaits your journey’s end.'

I use it in my fan-fics (that I normally won't put up anytime soon) for my OC. Hope it helps!

-Hikari

Great chapter, this story keeps getting better and better. I love how you've written it so far, keep it up. Can't wait for more chapters!

WOW. Good job. Just the way you've described everything is great. Keep it up.

Loved the latest chapter-especially the part with Cloud and Hades. You're doing an incredible job. Keep up the good work!

The last two chapters were written splendidly...I can't wait for the next chapter!

I like it. Also like how you are bringing more people into the story. Like actually having the tea party. Good stuff and update soon.

Finally a good KH novelization! Keep up the good work.