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| cheeky doggie 2006-05-21 ch 1,  | abuseI like this poem! Especially the way you ended each paragraph with - hunting. That must have been some thesaurus you used...0.0 but I especially love the way you ended it. 'For you I am hunting...' xD |
| FluffyDragonboy 2005-11-09 ch 1, | abusethat's not true your creative enough |
| Bunny Bubble 2005-08-26 ch 1, | abusewow! You're such a poet! WEll, i want DNAngel to be mine too, but you can't always get what you want! ~ royal_rabbit (from neopets) |
| KupoWrath 2005-08-15 ch 1, | abuseYes, that is a poem. And a good one at that. I like the repitition in the entire poem, and the emotion you managed to shove in there. Very nicely done I might add... *clings to Krad* POOR KRADY-POO! I LOVE YOU! *runs away, dodging numerous attacks from TWO people with wings* AW! DARKY-CUDDLE-KINS IS JEALOUS!! *hides behind a tree for it only to be a smoldering pile of nothingness... runs away for dear life* ~Kupo~ |
| Koway Oceshia 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseaw, that's really nice! krad keeps searching. i hope he finds dark. great poem!! really really good! |
| Krystean Ray 2005-08-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was trully beauitful! In my opinion you should be a poet! Great job! |
| Timetill 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abusea great poem. the repetition did a great job providing emphasis. |
| Misoka Mine 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was really cool. I love the way you kept the repition up. I never could have found that many ways to rhyme like that. Krad poems are few and far between- it's great to see one. |
| negolataknofelet 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abusenice poem I liked it |