Reviews for Broken Mind, Fractured Soul
Guest 5/15/13 . chapter 52
If you can do that to Dumbledore... the Dursley's are dead meat! I'm looking forward to the sequel(s).
FF app on this iPad will not let me log in, but I remain your adoring reader.
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hikaruluvr 5/9/13 . chapter 53
I first read this story around the time it came out and I have to say that this is still, to this day, one of my favorite HP fanfictions ever. I have not come across many other stories or authors that tell a story nearly as well as you do. I absolutely love this "trilogy"
Guest 5/5/13 . chapter 1
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Inexplicably Waiting 4/30/13 . chapter 53
Okay, won't be able to say too much here because I'm trying to type it on an iPad but this was a fantastic and truly unique story and I cannot wait to read the sequel! You are an amazing author.
awesome 4/28/13 . chapter 24
prank!
2563.1 4/28/13 . chapter 23
hiiiio
6fio 4/28/13 . chapter 22
68y9if awesomeneess
whole summer 4/28/13 . chapter 21
snapes!
VGFTGHNRM XZFY 4/28/13 . chapter 20
I am lost for words with this story!
Guest 4/28/13 . chapter 19
Cool!
AWWW 4/28/13 . chapter 18
The Aunt must die!
THis 4/28/13 . chapter 17
I hope everything goes alright!
Jenny 4/24/13 . chapter 2
Wow! This is really origonal and good. It's great the way you broke up Harry's personalities, I feel like you really got his components from cannon, he is all of those people sometimes, you just made it more glaring.
ChristinaCatastrophic 4/16/13 . chapter 33
I know my opinion doesn't matter now, since this has already been written, but I think that Harry and Gabriel should merge. I feel like the two of them together will make for a better merge, rather than Silas and Gabriel. Although that leaves Silas alone on the inside with Boy and Demon.
ChristinaCatastrophic 4/14/13 . chapter 19
Now, I know that this has already happened - as is my plight for reading completed stories - but I don't think that cutting off Ron or Hermione would be very good for him in the long run. I mean, he obviously isn't as close to them as he was in the books, and Neville has taken over as the main best friend. I think that it would be wise for Harry to be cautious about Ron and Hermione, keeping them at arms length.

I honestly cannot believe how well put together this story is.
Of course I have the writing capacity of a peanut, so I'm amazed at everything.
But seriously, this is so wonderfully thought out. I can imagine it would be difficult trying to fit so many personalities into one character.
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