very good story their arnt any on quit like it.telling the story of the tuffles against. the saiyans.althow i was kinda disapointed that vegeta and goku jr wernt in this fanfict much.i hope the swqell promises more interaction betean vegeta jr goku and the rest.

so someone relizes that their war is stuped and neads to end.i wonder hoo it is.

i wonder ho the saiyagin or tuffle was that was invisable and why it did that to them.good story hope you end it well.

i hope hoever the ily they are talking about knows about the poison and can worn the sayajin before it is too late.

i hope the saiyans can come up wuith a way yo win against the gases effects.i hope they dont all die out.

i hope the saiyans can do something so they are not wiped out.i hope the ape transfomation netralize the gases effects.great story so far.i will difenitly be downlaoding this story after i am threw reading it.

i wonder if vegeta and goku can change the fate of planet vegeta.maybe they could help train ssj so that whene the time comes they will have bean tauught to harnest ssj and not forget it.

well that explains alot altho i wonder why there a ssj.did planet vegeta ever have ssj. this story is getting relly good keap up the good work.

i was surprised that the king wasnt dead but i should have know he would servive he is a more sesoned fighter after all.i was even more surprised that his father told him that his son just wanted some training and left the traning grounds.i thought he said once a chalange had bean issued it could only lead to one of their deaths.i think its cool that vegeta and goku are their now mabe they can make pecee with the aiyans and the tuffuls.

i wonder what the outher saiyans reaction will be like whene they see vegeta and goku and what about the chibies what are they like on this world.very good fanfict so far keap up the good work.

noe thsat the chibies are ariving what will happen next .will they be able to train senzai to become a stronger and more skillfull supersaiyain.how will they be greated.

i wonder how the saiyans will react too vegeta and gokus decendents whene they see them.i hope the new king is a wise ruler hoo can put an end to this war.

i think his vegeta was treaying to get his son mad so he could defeat him in battle and claim the throne.

at this point i defenetly think its goku cence he was raised on earth he would not know the saiyan langage.cence vegeta was rased on vegetason he would most likely know the langage of the saiyans.

so whene are vegeta and goku going to make it onto new vegeta.what will the outher saiyqans reactions be.