wow that was really nice I wish I could write poems like that I ushally just you know rhyyme it's a lil third gradish I know but...
I love the descrition THat is the area that I need help with.

hmm very nice for being semi-short. i like the way you took on freestyle. one question, whos saying this? i assume not pansy. if you have no answer even better id say, mysterious, and she lost herself, her heart. nice touch either way ^^ good work
-=-Yours Truly
~*Piper Ice

good...

I'm not a big Draco fan--especaily after HPB-but I liked this.