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| Seriously Yours 2007-02-13 ch 2,  | abusePlease continue. These drabbles were great :) |
| Growing Pain 2006-04-15 ch 2, | abuse*falls to floor laughing* I loved this! Hilarious, and yet it showed how much he loves his Nanao-chan! :D Freaking wonderful! I had to supress a laugh in hte beginning when Shunsui said he "liked" to be bossed around by her and wiggled his eyebrows *laughs* Of coruse, there were even more segments that were flat out funny, but I can't mention them all and give htem individual praise, for I fear you would get annyoed with me, and I might laugh myself to death :/ Please write more! |
| Growing Pain 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseSuch sorrow, betrayal and angst. I loved it! The small hintage at Hitsugaya and Hinamoro was appreciated as well, he'd most likely understand more than she knows. |
| esther 2006-04-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseT_T damnit, i really want shunsui and nanao to get together...sob sob beautiful. |
| esther 2006-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseO_O was that a hint of hitsu x matsu at the end!? OMGNESS!? and yeah, really well written. i love hitsugaya...XD |
| Emo 2006-01-15 ch 2, anon. | abuselovin' it =] Good job! |
| gooeycheese 2005-12-20 ch 2, | abusedeep. another brillant chapter! |
| j.curl 2005-12-17 ch 2, | abuseGin and Rangiku, Shunshui and Nanao...my two favorite couples. When I read the first chapter of this, I thought it was going to be a oneshot (It can stand alone definitely) but I'm glad you continued. Keep up the good work! |
| angelic_blue 2005-12-17 ch 2, anon. | abusegreat fanfic! *รถ* the shunsui rangiku conversation was priceless *lol* they were so in character =] i especially liked the GinRan references, they're my uncontested favourites but ShunsuiNanao are also very lovely it's so sad... those pairings just don't get enough love T.T i'm glad you've devoted them. *thumbs up* |
| lacus-chan 2005-12-17 ch 2, anon. | abusenice! Please keep up the good work! |
| Gina 2005-12-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseTo be honest, I'm lazy. But you deserve every review I can offer you, so here it is for chapter one. Is there going to be one with Hitsugaya? Yes? Yes? *winks* |
| Gina 2005-12-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseYou're so good at this! I love your writing. |
| Kryssa 2005-12-17 ch 2, | abuseI like this story. Far too often, character portrayals take only what's given at face value in the canon story without trying to see deeper meaning. I like the context of Rangiku's outward pain resonating against Hitsugaya and Shunsui and, to some unrelated extent, Ise. It was interested to see Gin from Rangiku's POV, since we usually think of him as this completely evil, unredeemable character. Yet she knows him otherwise, which gives greater depth to the betrayal, as you so poingnantly showed us. And the not-quite sexual conversation between Rangiku and Shunsui (and later between Ise and Shunsui) was surprisingly good. Often I see sexual matters handled with less circumspection and more swear words than necessary, but the few lines written showed us a great deal about the shinigami. I'm very interested to see what other characters and stories you're going to bring into this. Please update soon, and thanks for a great read. |
| amwong88 2005-12-17 ch 2, | abuseah...i adore Shunsui and Nanao fics. So glad to read it here , even if the story is mainly angsting about rangiku. Please please update soon and please add more Shunsui-ness - he's so cute! |
| purplerebecca 2005-12-16 ch 2, | abuseFabulous. ^^ |