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Reviews for: One Step Behind You
Milky
2005-10-16 . chapter 1
Tears swelled in my eyes and goosebumps were erupting down my arms while I read this. The scene when they had to split was really the saddest moment. You brought it out really well. Great job CJ!
Lizzy Weasley
2005-08-29 . chapter 1
Well done!
Lizzy
Shmily
2005-08-16 . chapter 1
I really liked the style of this piece. I think that it captures the character exceptionally well and I think that it did a fabulous job in drawing in the reader...hence why I'm reviewing. Keep up the fabulous work.

Shmily,
Meg ^_^
Watermelon Wishes
2005-08-13 . chapter 1
Great job, as usual. =) Plus, I could tell it was Ginny, since she was the one who liked Harry first - so you used good clues to show who's telling the story, witout actually saying who's telling it. (God, I sound like an English textbook.) Anyway, great job!
FireAtWill52
2005-08-11 . chapter 1
that was so beautiful...
Queen Bean
2005-08-11 . chapter 1
aw...that was so pretty and sweet...I really liked it..I love G/H...Do you mind telling your opinion on one of my stories? I don't have many reviews, but I would love to hear you opinion...great job!
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