|Reviews for lost without you|
| santa crux 11/20/06 . chapter 1
This is a very romantic story. It has a lyrical flow to it with many lovely images. The characters both old and new are believable. Thanks for keeping TOTSS alive in your story.
| IshTara 8/13/05 . chapter 1
The things we put our favourite characters through... But we always save them in the end! ;D
You do have an intriguing story here, but you really should find a beta-reader. Your grammar is absolutely atrocious! I almost stopped reading several times and skipped down whole pages, to get to the ending sooner. That just doesn't do a story justice and with some help I think you could do a lot better.