This is a very romantic story. It has a lyrical flow to it with many lovely images. The characters both old and new are believable. Thanks for keeping TOTSS alive in your story.

The things we put our favourite characters through... But we always save them in the end! ;D

You do have an intriguing story here, but you really should find a beta-reader. Your grammar is absolutely atrocious! I almost stopped reading several times and skipped down whole pages, to get to the ending sooner. That just doesn't do a story justice and with some help I think you could do a lot better.

Good luck!