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MadGeorge
2006-03-29
ch 6,
abuseWoohoo! Oh, I shall miss reading about the fabulous adventures of the underpants gnomes, but this ending rocked my socks. You're welcome, but I feel like I should be thanking you guys for supplying me with endless hours of hilarity!
Leaf on the Wind
2006-02-05
ch 5,
abuseHey you guys! Great ending, it was hilarious! I've always wondered what Gil would be like if he got totally smashed. I guess now I've got some idea...hehehe I can't wait for the epilogue, hope it comes in a more timely fashion than this chapter!

Maddy
Trench Mouth
2006-01-19
ch 5,
abuseHa! awesomee!
awesomepossum
2006-01-14
ch 5,
abuseHooray!! The return of Paddy Murphy! Woo hoo! More rollicking fun as usual (wow do I sound like a real critic or what? Rollicking. Hah.) An excellent way to continue the saga. And hooray for epilogues! Can't wait!

xoxo~awesomepossum~
AzureHart
2006-01-11
ch 5, anon.
abuseGlad to see you finally updated this story.

I probably shouldn't have read it at work though, my boss keeps asking me what I'm laughing at. :)
MadGeorge
2006-01-10
ch 5,
abuseOMG. LOVED IT. I wish I could write that kind of stuff! That was AMAZINGLY HILARIOUS!
Windy City Dreamer
2006-01-09
ch 5,
abuseThat was insane! Complete and utter madness! And considering that was what you were going for, I'd say your job is done.
kam
2006-01-09
ch 5, anon.
abusehahaha you guys are so funny i lmao reading this write a sequal i would tottaly love it.
FanficAddiction
2006-01-01
ch 4,
abuseYou are INsane, but thanks for this. It made me laugh hysterically. Especially this:

Catherine walked up to Greg. “I suppose, you’re jealous of the cat now. Rubbing all over Sara’s Tatas.”

At the mention of Tatas and Sara in the same sentence, Greg’s brain ceased to function, and his only response was an incoherent gargling sound reminiscent of Homer Simpson. He even had the drool in the corner of his mouth. Catherine slapped him.
FanficAddiction
2006-01-01
ch 2,
abuse"...And Greg still believes that Canada’s government meets in a giant igloo.”

Laughing hysterically.
FanficAddiction
2006-01-01
ch 1,
abuseI'm scared to go on... but somehow, I feel as if I must...
Windy City Dreamer
2005-11-12
ch 4,
abuseAw. Come on its so bogus to leave us hangin like that. Please, please, please update soon.
heartagram69
2005-10-07
ch 4,
abuseMORE MORE MORE SO F'ING FUNNI
snairah
2005-10-02
ch 4, anon.
abuseNice job, I'm still laughing... especially about the "IT BE NIИNE O’The KLOK". Your description of the actions of the drunkards it fantastic. I actually was reminded of many drunken adventures I have been on, especially with the underpants (since moving to Newfoundland I have realized that events like these occur more often than I had realized... Miramichi is tame compared to what goes on here)

I can't wait to read the rest.

Now what else can I come up with (please excuse the rambling... I do beleive I hear the same voices in my head that you do).

I beleive you made a reference to Sara dating Rick, if this is Rick Mercer may I remind you that he is gay, but hey you may have already known that, and were going to working it back in sometime later.

Bursting at the seams with Canadian, and Martime references... I'm a sucker for that kind of stuff... I just hope that other ppl get it.

I enjoy the movement you have made from having the investigators almost stereotypical with a few characteristics, to making some things blatantly obvious. I often get agravated with the show for having them be such card-board cut-outs at times, but avid viewers may be turned off by bringing out more of these characters. Then again it is amusing to see you take on the social dynamics of this group.

Well I can't really think of anything else to say, I hope this wasnt too all over the place, I obviously did not have a plan made up when I started talking...

Keep up the writting!

-Sarah (Carrie, Ben told me about this page.. knowing I was a CSI fan and all)

PS if you have any questions, or would like to talk more about my review, fell free to email me.
peeka. boo?
2005-09-21
ch 4, anon.
abuseHA HA HA! funny! I lurve crazy drunken irish wannabes!! This is so hilarium! good job!

wo0t wo0t, you dudes are my heros!!

lotsa lurve ♥ pєєқά вoo
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