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| Dark Twinkling Star 2008-02-18 ch 9,  | abuseGood story!:D |
| Grand Puba of All The Smurf... 2008-02-15 ch 9, | abuseA nice conclusion. |
| Ivy3 2006-10-22 ch 9, | abuseSeemed to have ended rather quickly. The double take on each chapter, from different points of view were sometimes annoying to reread. But I liked the fact that you elaberated the Greg angst of the explosion- the show really didn't do him any justice. |
| Nyx Raisa 2006-04-22 ch 9, | abuse*grins* No problem. Anytime. |
| Jennie 2006-04-20 ch 9, | abuseNice. I like the way you've gone through the characters and showed the situation in their point of views. And you've certainly done a great job with them as well. |
| Sillie 2006-04-20 ch 9, | abuseHeh, I needed to read back a bit to get back into the story, but I'm glad you updated. :3 |
| Nyx Raisa 2006-04-19 ch 8, | abuseHrm...Sara and Grissom (and Greg) having breakfast together. Very interesting. Would like to read the next chapter now... *wink* |
| Nyx Raisa 2006-04-19 ch 7, | abuseDr. Cameron...is that like a shoutout to House? *grin* About the last chapter, you are the uncontested queen of the multi-POV scene. And Yay for Brass (that's this chapter though. How many reviews is this? Sick of me yet?) |
| Nyx Raisa 2006-04-19 ch 3, | abuse3 POVs of the same scene. I love you. *worship* And I just love Sara in this scene. Don't know why. Just because. |
| Nyx Raisa 2006-04-19 ch 2, | abuseI really like how you did both POVs of this scene. Sometimes it gets really annoying, both to write and to read (I would know; I've done it) but you pull it off really well. Continuing on now. |
| Kate K 2005-10-11 ch 8, | abuseExcellent! I'm so glad I found this story. There's really never been any follow up to the lab explosion, except for the shaking hands scene. And I love how you've tied it in with Nick's ordeal from "Grave Danger". You're doing a wonderful job with this story, but I'm curious as to how things will go with Warrick, if you get back to him (could Warrick's anger/frustration with Greg in "GD" be the reason he kept calling him "Greg" in "Room Service"?). I'm so looking forward to the next update! |
| Pog Mahon 2005-10-08 ch 8, | abuseoh yeah, REVENGE OF THE HAPPY-PILLS! Dr. Cameron scares me. i can only imagine how she makes Greg feel... pleas update soon! very nice! i think cheese is good too! |
| dArkliTe-sPirit 2005-10-08 ch 8, | abuse*is slightly confused* Okay... Still, update! |
| remoob1513 2005-10-07 ch 8, | abusei liked this chapter, hopefully Greg can maybe cheer up. and i'm surprised Griss said yes to breakfast, and i dont think that Greg told Sara about Griss tagging along. i hope that you dont take that long to update again. please please please please please please please please please PLEASE UPDATE SOON? PLEASE? |
| boboskiwatin 2005-10-07 ch 8, | abuseYEAY! I like this fic.. it's different then all the other Greg fics! |