Reviews for Aryn's Story Rewritten Version

Reviews For: Aryn's Story Rewritten Version

Anonymous 2008-02-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseI came to reread the (original) story, because even if it needs a bit of a rewrite, it's so awesome. Then I found the updated Chapter Two, which is full of awesomeness. : D Please update with more chapters! Btw, is Donna Nobis Pacem ever going to be updated? Or, maybe, after this is done? meh.
The Mouse Avenger 2008-01-06 ch 2,	abuseHooray, another new chappie! ^_^ Though I must say I still like the old one better. ^^;;
lightening816 2005-09-02 ch 1,	abuseThis is getting good!
The Mouse Avenger 2005-08-20 ch 1,	abuseI actually liked the first version. I thought it was cool, right down to your aforementioned ziggurat. I personally think there's no need to rewrite that story--I like it for what it is. (starts flushing) That's my opinion, anyway. (walks off ashamedly)
rain rain don't show your f... 2005-08-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was good, and it read very smoothly. I didn't read your original version of this, but (judging by your author notes and such) I take it was a ... good thing? Lol, well, this sounds interesting, a good read, and I'm looking forward to more. Keep it up! (ps the "You always avoid her cooking" part made me laugh, :D)
Kixstana Boxin 2005-08-15 ch 1,	abuseYo, Yo, Yo! Kixstana's in the hizz-ouse! ...I'm sorry. I had to do it...DON'T JUDGE ME, MY LIFE'S NOT ON TRIAL! ahem Yes, well...This was a great chapter, and I'm glad you guys are going to rewrite some old stuff. It's always fun to see how much you've improved and this is one of the best ways how. Now, about the chapter. I found them in character, and that pleases me. Oh how it pleases...towers fingers and taps them together ...Anyway, so yeah. HI SKYECHAN! HI SKYECHAN'S FRIEND! wavewavewave ... ...You know. This almost inspires me to write my own? ..NAH! ^_^
Kylie Basil 2005-08-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat story dude.

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