awesome. so painful and heart wrenchingly sad. and cambell proved how nieve some of the soldiers could be. that was great. loved the character depth into brin and krit.
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Lean, harsh, painful-really creative. Unique POV, great idea.

"Lessard knew the teddy bears got to Simmons."

Incredible bold strokes, defining characters & moments with seeming ease. You're really versatile. I guess I'll dip into your Harry Potter fics next and see what's up there.

Thanks for writing this.

This is one of my favorites. It's a refreshing new perspective, and very insiteful. You have to wonder what Lydecker's goons think of the whole process.

Good. Moving.

I like it. It's interesting to think about how the X-5s look to their pursuers; I hadn't really considered it too much before. Gotta tell you, though- the end, where he didn't turn her in, was predictable. But in a good way, because its good to know that someone cares at least a little bit about them.

Really good stuff. Gives us a unique view of how the Manticore troopers view their prey. Makes us realize that these guys are people who have thought and emotions just like anybody else.

I really liked this! I think you should write a sequel... There's a lot of potential with Lessard's character.

Wonderful as always. Very original perspective, great writing style. You always have a way of writing these perspectives that touch the reader, amazing.