COLL! so what will happen next!? dun dun dun!! lol that was stupid! what ev

wow that was uh long. . . um ok well it was still good and sad :'( oh wells NEXT CHAPTER!

One thing I would suggest is to break up the chapters; it's a little difficult (for me, at least) to have to scroll through such a long document in one sitting.

I like how the picture Tohru has of her mom is Kyoko's old ID card. And it's funny, that Tohru lives in a tent!

I don't think there's such a thing as a "good curse." Maybe if it had another name or something, but that just doesn't make sense to me.

Ha ha! I suspected Tohru was the customer service lady, but then dismissed the idea when the narration didn't linger on her. Cool!

I don't know why, but it seems like you write better when there is at least one Sohma in the scene. There seems to be a more balanced mix of description and dialogue, I mean, than when it's all non-Sohmas.

The writing is much better in this chapter. Kyo and Haru were _perfect_, I loved reading their scenes. Shouldn't it be taser, not teaser?
"In other words, Haru went Black, stole the vehicle from some poor sap, and drove off into the sunset, laughing manically as he did so" - that line made me laugh!
I like the idea of the Juunishi being locked up as experiments, having to be rescued by the one "wild" one.

I like the AU development of Katsuya and Kyoko's relationship. Also, cute way to explain why Tohru has a boy's name.

YAYS! You updated! *glomp* You didn't rescue Momiji like you said you would though...*sniffles* So, I liked the chapter and, and, I bet this will be a Kyoru! Just because you like Kyo better that Yuki... Or maybe just to prove me wrong, it'll be a Yukiru, or a HaruxTohru! Hm, I'm not sure I would want you to be my lawyer...hm...I know! I'll let you babysit my "pets"! So, anyways, enough rambling and randomness, update soon, or provoke the wrath of my origami penguin army (which I just refound)!

That annoying girl who used to be in ASL with you aka. Shigure

Yeah could you be my lawyer? That'll make my day due to the fact that I do not have a lawyer by my side. *sighs* So sad. I have declared my thoughts; this story has to be my favorite Fruits Basket Fanfiction EVER! It used to be this other story, but your's just has this catchy feeling to it I suppose. Now some comments about your story! In the beginning I have to say; I was a tiny bit bored, but that didn't mean I didn't enjoy it. I was very content because you updated, so every word I read was a wonderful time! But what REALLY caught my attention (and this really made this story my favorite) was when you revealed that the girl who was speaking with Kyo was actually Tohru. I was so stunned that you could easily hide her identity like that. That made me impress because that was out of the blue and I have really never seen anything like that. Because you did this I just...wow. Even if this might sound strange, that was very good. It's very nice that Tohru helped Hatsuharu, Kyo and Yuki. So I suppose this is where the story starts to begin eh? Well, I know I have more to say but I rather end this review and wait for your next chapter. Thank you for replying earlier! And since today is Thanksgiving, I suppose I could say, "Happy Thanksgiving!" And, because I really enjoy this story, when I update my next chapter I will recommend this story to my reviewers okay? Just update as soon as possible!

DarkKyo

Another wonderful chapter here! I really liked this one a lot; I found myself chuckling through the paragraphs so that's really good (at least for me that is. I barely laugh at stories...) But I don't think you made Hatsuharu sound all macho and everything; you made him his usual calm laid-back guy; that's what makes him so cute. Ha...when you first mentioned the Jeep I'm thinking, "Woah he can drive?" And then you mentioned it in the story and he's like, "What if I don't have a licsence?" Now that's funny...I LOVE Kyo so much so I'm glad that you put him in this chapter...through the WHOLE chapter to be exact. Hatsuharu is my second favorite character as well so it's nice to see my two favorite characters together. I got to say; you are really doing a great job here! This has to be one of my favorite stories so far so be happy! I barely read fanfiction stories but I have a writers blocks so I can't think of anything to write. So what better to do then go around and reading stories? So please update chapter 3 as soon as possible! You have a wonderful story progressing here!

DarkKyo

I got to say. I really like this story even though I'm a very picky person believe it or not. I knew that this chapter would be long, but at least the first ten chapters really caught my interest so I couldn't possibly go away. I can't really explain on why I like this chapter...it kind of had everything that I was looking for; not to mention hard to find in other stories. All the characters are far from OOC and that too is also hard to find with other stories and I like that a lot. There were really sad moments; especially the ending of Katsuya and Kyoko. That was sad; leaving Tohru by herself. But she does have Uotani and Hanajima then. I don't know that much about katsuya since I'm only on volume 11, but I can tell that he is really in character. Kind of reminds me of Kureno if you think about it...strange. But this is chapter one...I wonder what the next one will bring. Great job and I'll wait for your next chapter! I think this is my favorite Furuba Sci-fi fanfiction...ha ha.

DarkKyo

Darn it, Haru! Get updating! I check it EVERY day! Momiji can't survive that long in an enviroment like that! *sob, sob* So PLEASE for my sanity (what I have left of it, anyway)update SOON! Thanks much! *winks*

I liked the 2nd chapter! *starts snickering* You could get Yuki's personality, but not Kyo's, shame on you. Um, When will you rescue Momiji? Anyways, I like it so far, Haru.

The Annoying girl who used to be in ASL with you. AKA. Tohru

whoa long prologue! XD its realli nice! update soon!

Hiya, Jessi!

That was a great story! I wanna see which pairing you chose! *gives cookie*